Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a brief example. Avoid redundancies and fix unclear phrasing (e.g., "typing a piece a person to be quick" is incorrect). Use linking words like "because" or "also."

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand, I tend to recall lecture details more easily, so I study more effectively.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar and avoid irrelevant sentimental phrases. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I practise for my aviation course on it. My laptop is my main device for coursework and simulations, so I type on it regularly.

제안: This answer is clear and relevant. To improve, combine sentences with linking words and add a brief specific detail about what you learned (e.g., touch-typing or basic keys) to show range and precision.

예시: I learned to type when I was about ten because I needed to use a desktop for a school project, and my mother showed me the basics, including proper finger placement and common shortcuts.

제안: Good structure and relevant detail. To raise the score, add a specific method or resource (e.g., typing software, exercises) and link ideas with connectors like "so" or "therefore."

예시: I improve my typing by practising on my laptop for about 15–20 minutes each day and using online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy, so my accuracy has improved over time.

× Moreover, typing a piece a person to be quick and it does not allow room for too many mistakes as you have to go back again and type everything.

✓ Moreover, typing makes a person quick and does not allow room for many mistakes because you have to go back and type everything again.

The original sentence has incorrect structure and missing verb forms. 'Typing a piece a person to be quick' is ungrammatical. Use 'typing makes a person quick' with the verb 'makes' plus noun phrase. Also 'does not allow room for too many mistakes' is acceptable but 'many mistakes' is more natural. Place 'again' after 'type' for correct adverb placement. Suggestions: use clear subject-verb structure and place adverbs in natural position.

× My dad got the laptop for me when I was 10 years old and the laptop is very close to my heart so I'll have typing on the laptop.

✓ My dad got the laptop for me when I was 10 years old, and the laptop is very close to my heart, so I will keep typing on it.

'I'll have typing on the laptop' is ungrammatical. The student intended future continuous/habitual meaning; 'I will keep typing on it' or 'I will continue typing on it' is correct. Also use pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: use 'keep' or 'continue' with the base verb for ongoing actions and replace noun repetition with pronoun.

× I learnt to type on a keyboard when I was around 10 years old.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was around 10 years old.

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are past-tense forms; in American English 'learned' is preferred. If maintaining consistency with other past-tense verbs (I had to type, my mom taught), use 'learned'. Suggestion: choose one past-tense variant consistent with the dialect used in the rest of the answer.

× I have improved my typing skills by being regular and practicing on the laptop daily.

✓ I have improved my typing skills by being consistent and practicing on the laptop daily.

'Being regular' is not natural collocation in this context; 'being consistent' is the correct adjective usage. The present perfect 'have improved' is appropriate. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'being consistent' or 'practicing regularly'.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day as I practice for my aviation course.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I practice for my aviation course.

Using 'as' can mean 'while' or 'because'; here 'because' makes the causal relationship clearer. Suggestion: use 'because' to express reason, or 'while' if meaning simultaneous actions.

× I try to spend around 15 to 20 minutes typing and improving my typing speed.

✓ I try to spend around 15 to 20 minutes typing and improving my typing speed.

Sentence is grammatically correct regarding singular/plural. No change needed; included here to indicate checked item.