Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g. 'prefer handwriting' not 'prefer to handwriting').

예시: I prefer handwriting. Writing by hand helps me concentrate better, and I often come up with more creative ideas when I write notes on paper. For example, sketching diagrams while taking notes helps me remember concepts more easily.

제안: Give a direct answer then two clear, specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases and redundancies, and use proper word choice (e.g. 'device' instead of 'machine').

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day. I use it for work emails and documents, and I also study online and take practice exams, so the laptop is essential for both tasks.

제안: Open with a clear time reference, then explain context with specific details and correct vocabulary (e.g. 'computer class' or 'basic IT course', not 'computer license'). Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrases.

예시: I learned to type in high school during a basic computer class. Our teacher showed us touch-typing techniques and exercises to remember the keys, which gave me a useful foundation for later computer work.

제안: Structure your answer: state your main method, then give two concrete examples of practice with linking words. Correct grammar and use specific verbs (e.g. 'I practice daily', 'I design graphics'). Avoid vague or broken sentences.

예시: I improve my typing by practising every day. For example, I usually message friends and type essays online, and I also work on simple graphic design projects where I use the keyboard and mouse together, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because when I handwrite by myself I can focus on my attention and it's always help me to have different and creative ideas.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I handwrite by myself I can focus my attention and it always helps me have different and creative ideas.

Pronoun/possessive: 'focus on my attention' is incorrect; use 'focus my attention' or 'focus on the task.' Subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'it's always help' is incorrect; correct is 'it always helps' because the subject 'it' with third-person singular requires 'helps'. Also remove unnecessary 'to' before 'have'.

× So I prefer to handwriting.

✓ So I prefer handwriting.

Verb pattern: After 'prefer' use the noun or gerund form 'handwriting' or the gerund 'writing by hand.' 'Prefer to handwriting' mixes infinitive and gerund and is ungrammatical. Remove 'to'.

× Yes, I need to type on my laptop keyboard everyday because I need to work and I also need to study, so it's important machine for me to learn something like I can test my examinations from the laptop so I have to.

✓ Yes, I need to type on my laptop keyboard every day because I need to work and study, so the laptop is an important machine for me to learn and take my exams.

Preposition/adverb: 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). Article and word order: 'it's important machine' needs an article and clearer structure: 'the laptop is an important machine.' Awkward phrasing 'learn something like I can test my examinations from the laptop' corrected to 'learn and take my exams' for clarity and grammaticality.

× Well, it's remind me.

✓ Well, it reminds me.

Verb form: 'remind' needs third-person singular present form 'reminds' because the subject 'it' requires agreement in present tense.

× I learned it from my high school.

✓ I learned it in high school.

Preposition: Use 'in high school' rather than 'from my high school' to sound natural. Past tense 'learned' is correct for a past event.

× We have some computer license and our teacher taught me how to type and even how to remember the location of different keyboard.

✓ We had some computer certificates, and our teacher taught me how to type and how to remember the locations of the different keys on the keyboard.

Word choice/quantifier: 'some computer license' is incorrect; use 'computer certificates' or 'a computer course.' Number agreement: 'location of different keyboard' should be 'locations' and 'keys' on 'the keyboard.' Also change tense to past 'had' to match 'taught.'

× I think it's a basic but important license for us, even for me.

✓ I think it was a basic but important certificate for us, and especially for me.

Word choice: 'license' is not the usual term here; 'certificate' or 'course' fits. Tense consistency: use past 'was' to match earlier past context. 'Even for me' is awkward; 'especially for me' is clearer.

× I just practice every day from the middle school.

✓ I have practised/practiced every day since middle school.

Tense and preposition: 'just practice every day from the middle school' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'have practised' with 'since middle school' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present.

× I really type some message for my friends which had to online and it's a way to help me to practice my typing and the other ways like I really to control the mouse and the keyboard at the same time to design some logos and post.

✓ I often type messages for my friends that have to be sent online, and this helps me practice my typing. I also learned to control the mouse and the keyboard at the same time to design logos and posts.

Pronoun/relative clause: 'which had to online' is incorrect; use 'that have to be sent online' or 'that I send online.' Verb forms and structure: split into two sentences for clarity. 'I really to control' is ungrammatical; change to 'I learned to control.' Use plural 'posts' and consistent verbs.

× So I think those.

✓ So I think those activities helped me improve my typing.

Incomplete sentence: 'So I think those' is a sentence fragment. Provide a clear noun and verb to complete the thought, e.g. 'those activities helped me improve my typing.'