Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and use linking words to contrast your preferences. Also give one specific reason for each preference. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: I prefer handwriting when I study, but I usually type when I work. Handwriting helps me remember information better, while typing is faster and more convenient for work documents.

제안: Answer directly with present-tense clarity, avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. State which device you use most and give a short reason. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because my job requires me to work remotely. However, I sometimes use a desktop at the office when I need a larger screen.

제안: Start with a clear time reference, use past tense correctly, and give a concise explanation of how you learned. Avoid vague phrases and keep it to 2–3 sentences with linking words if needed.

예시: I learned to type about ten years ago when my father bought a laptop. I practiced regularly on the computer and gradually improved my speed and accuracy.

제안: Describe a clear method and its frequency, use correct verb forms, and give one specific result or improvement. Use linking words to show cause and effect.

예시: I improved my typing by practicing with short texts my mother gave me every day on my laptop. As a result, my typing speed increased and I make fewer mistakes.

× I tend to both items are necessary because, uh, when I study, uh, I prefer handwriting, uh, when I work, of course, uh, I tend to typing is very simple.

✓ I think both are necessary: when I study, I prefer handwriting; when I work, I tend to type because it is simpler.

Original sentence has run-on structure and incorrect phrases like 'I tend to both items are necessary' and 'I tend to typing is very simple.' This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correct by splitting ideas into clearer clauses, using 'think' to express opinion, 'both are necessary' as a complete clause, and using the infinitive 'to type' or simple present 'I tend to type.' Also replace 'very simple' with 'simpler' to compare handwriting and typing concisely. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× I used to use a desktop and laptop keyboard every day. Because I used to use. I used to work my job and my job needs to type on a.

✓ I used to use both a desktop and a laptop keyboard every day because my job required me to type a lot.

Fragments and incorrect phrasing cause unclear meaning. 'I used to use.' is a fragment. 'My job needs to type on a.' is ungrammatical. This fits verb in the present participle/form issues and sentence structure (ID 10 and 26), but per instructions only correct listed types—primary problem is sentence structure and verb form. Combine into one complete past-tense sentence using 'used to' and 'required me to type.' Remove extra articles and complete the object ('a lot'). Grammar Problem Type ID: 10

× It was long time ago I learned how to tape on a keyboard because my father purchased laptop and I studied half the type on the keyboard and have to use the computer it's.

✓ It was a long time ago that I learned how to type on a keyboard because my father purchased a laptop, and I had to learn to use the computer.

Multiple tense and article errors. Use 'It was a long time ago that...' and correct 'tape' to 'type.' Use past tense consistently: 'purchased' and 'had to learn.' Add the article 'a' before 'laptop.' The original mixes present and past and includes fragments, so this is a past tense issue (ID 5) and sentence structure (ID 26). Ensure verb forms match past time reference. Grammar Problem Type ID: 5

× How do I improve my typing? My mother gave me a text related on her book and that's why I write type everyday on my laptop. Then I improved my type.

✓ My mother gave me a text related to her book, so I type every day on my laptop. That helped me improve my typing.

Incorrect preposition 'related on' should be 'related to' (ID 11). Also 'write type everyday on my laptop' is ungrammatical—use 'type every day.' Maintain tense: present habitual 'I type every day' and present perfect/simple past for improvement: 'That helped me improve my typing.' Clarify 'type' vs 'typing' and separate sentences for clarity. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11