Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer tries to explain preference but is unclear, disfluent and contains grammar mistakes. To improve: give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then add one or two clear, specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / so). Keep sentences short (max 4–5). Correct common errors: use "I prefer typing/handwriting," "it's easier," and avoid redundant phrases.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because I keep all my notes on my phone and laptop, so I can access them anytime. For example, I can quickly search for old notes, which saves me time and helps me stay organized.

제안: The answer gives a clear preference but has grammar, word choice and coherence problems. Improve by starting with a direct statement (I mainly use my phone), then give one or two concise supporting reasons using linking words (because / so). Use correct comparative forms (faster, more comfortable) and avoid awkward phrases like "do not forget about my mouth."

예시: I mainly use my phone keyboard because it is faster and more convenient. For instance, I can open my phone and type ideas instantly, so I don't forget them.

제안: Your response gives a time frame but contains tense and word choice errors and some unclear phrases. Improve by giving a precise time reference (e.g. when I was in fourth grade), use correct tense (I learned / it was difficult), and add a brief detail about how you learned (classes, practice) using a linking word.

예시: I learned to type when I was in fourth grade at primary school. It was difficult at first, but regular practice and using my phone helped me improve quickly.

제안: This answer is confusing and off-topic in parts ("loves wedding" and "ancestor" are unclear). To improve: answer directly with methods you use to improve typing (practice, online exercises, typing apps), use linking words (for example, so / therefore), and give specific examples and frequency (e.g. I practise 15 minutes daily). Keep sentences concise and grammatically correct.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing daily with a typing app for about 15 minutes, which helps me increase speed and accuracy. For example, I do short exercises and timed tests three times a week to track my progress.

× I prefer it can frighten because I'm a big fan of my notes in my phone, so I can use it every day and every second and I before of course his writing because also I have I have notes on my laptop and it's more easier for me to write in something for documents.

✓ I prefer typing because I like having my notes on my phone, so I can use them every day and every second. Before, of course, I preferred handwriting, but I also have notes on my laptop and it's easier for me to write documents on it.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns (it, his) and inconsistent references. Use 'typing' as a noun and 'them' for plural 'notes'. Replace 'it' and 'his' with clear nouns (phone, handwriting). Also simplify and split into two sentences for clarity.

× I do both types every day, but for me more comfortable, more convenient, It's my keyboard on my phone because I can it's more faster for me and I can just open my phone and start typing at this moment.

✓ I use both types every day, but the keyboard on my phone is more comfortable and more convenient. It's faster for me, and I can just open my phone and start typing immediately.

Comparative forms and adverb placement are incorrect. Use 'more comfortable/more convenient' to compare nouns; use 'faster' (not 'more faster'). Place adjectives with the noun they modify and use 'immediately' instead of 'at this moment' for natural adverb use.

× And also this helps me do not forget about my thoughts and my mouth.

✓ This also helps me not forget my thoughts and what I want to say.

The phrase 'do not forget about my thoughts and my mouth' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'helps me not forget' (correct verb + negation order) and replace 'my mouth' with 'what I want to say' to express the intended meaning.

× Since I was a child, I've already have a phone and also I think I learned how to tap on my keyboard when I was at primary school and I was in the 4th grade and it was so difficult for me to learn this.

✓ Since I was a child, I have already had a phone, and I think I learned to tap on a keyboard when I was in primary school in the fourth grade. It was very difficult for me to learn.

The original mixes present perfect and incorrect auxiliary 'have have'. Use 'have had' or simply 'have had' for possession since childhood. Use 'learned to tap' (correct infinitive structure). Also simplify tense consistency and fix adjective use ('very difficult').

× And yeah, I didn't know the accurate.

✓ And yes, I didn't know the correct way.

'Didn’t know the accurate' is ungrammatical; 'accurate' needs a noun ('accurate method' or 'correct way'). Replace with 'correct way' to convey the intended meaning.

× By the way, I was a child who loves wedding and writing books, so it was my hobby and it was ancestor.

✓ When I was a child, I loved reading and writing books, so it became my hobby and a family tradition.

The original has incorrect vocabulary ('wedding' instead of 'reading'?) and 'ancestor' is misused. Use 'When I was a child' and correct verbs 'loved reading and writing'. If the speaker meant family tradition, use 'family tradition' instead of 'ancestor'.

× It was necessary for me to write my thoughts in my notes, in my phones notes.

✓ It was necessary for me to write my thoughts in my phone's notes.

Use the possessive form 'phone's notes' and avoid repeating 'notes'. This fixes incorrect noun phrase and pronoun/possessive usage.

× And at first it was difficult, yeah. But after that, it was my hobby. It became a hobby. And yeah.

✓ At first it was difficult, but after a while it became my hobby.

The original is repetitive and disjointed. Combine sentences and use past tense 'became' for clear, concise expression. Remove filler words for fluency.