Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문장은 더 직접적이고 간결해야 합니다. 주제문으로 바로 답한 뒤 이유를 1–2개의 구체적 근거로 제시하세요. 반복(‘I prefer’ 두 번)과 의미 없는 감탄사(umm)를 줄이고, 자연스러운 표현(beautiful → neat / attractive)을 사용하세요. 예: 주제문(선호), 이유(읽기 편함, 창의성 또는 기억에 도움이 됨), 간단한 예시로 마무리.

예시: I prefer handwriting because my handwriting is neat and easier for me to remember than typed notes. For example, when I write by hand I often draw small diagrams and use arrows, which helps me review information later.

제안: 응답이 혼란스럽고 내용이 구체적이지 않습니다. 질문에 바로 데스크톱/노트북 중 무엇을 사용하는지 명확히 대답한 뒤 장소(예: 카페, 집), 빈도(매일/주 몇 회), 간단한 이유를 연결어로 설명하세요. 불필요한 단어(‘um’, 의미불명 단어)는 제거하세요.

예시: I type on a laptop every day because it’s portable and I often work in cafés. I usually use it for emails, writing reports, and browsing, so I prefer a laptop over a desktop.

제안: 시간 표현과 이유를 간결하게 정리하세요. ‘When’에 대한 직접 답변(중학교)을 먼저 말하고, 부모님이 노트북을 사주신 사실과 그 경험이 어땠는지 구체적이고 자연스럽게 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 단어와 어색한 표현(‘surprised to the computers every aspects’)을 더 명확한 영어로 고치세요.

예시: I learned to type when I was in middle school. My parents bought me a laptop then, and I was excited to discover how fast I could write and how the keyboard sounds helped me keep a rhythm.

제안: 방법을 구체적으로 제시하고 논리적으로 연결하세요. 연습 방법(온라인 타자 연습, 게임, 정기적인 연습 시간), 빈도(하루 몇 분), 그리고 효과(속도 증가, 정확도 향상)를 포함하면 좋습니다. 불필요한 단어와 반복을 줄이고 문장을 명확히 구성하세요.

예시: I improve my typing by using online typing games and practice websites for about 15 minutes a day. This helps me increase my speed and accuracy while keeping the practice enjoyable.

× I prefer handwriting because, umm, my handwriting is so good to see.

✓ I prefer handwriting because my handwriting looks very good.

The pronoun 'to see' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. Use a verb phrase that naturally describes appearance: 'looks very good'. Improve by removing redundant words and choosing correct verb collocation.

× It's, it's beautiful that many people like my handwriting.

✓ It is beautiful that many people like my handwriting.

Repeating 'it's' is disfluent speech filler. Remove repetition for grammatical sentence. Keep single 'It is' and ensure subject and complement are clear.

× So I prefer to I prefer writing in hands.

✓ So I prefer writing by hand.

The phrase contains repetition and incorrect preposition 'in hands'. Use the idiomatic expression 'write by hand' or 'writing by hand'. Remove duplicated words.

× I type on Waptab every day because, uh, boss.

✓ I type on my laptop every day because of work.

The original phrase 'because, uh, boss' is unclear and likely a mis-speech. Replace with a clear subject and preposition: 'because of work' or 'because of my boss' depending on meaning. Use possessive 'my' for devices.

× I spend the most time outward working on the laptop and usually in cafes.

✓ I spend most of my time working on my laptop, usually in cafes.

Word order and word choice are incorrect: 'outward' is wrong; use 'most of my time' and place adverbial phrases properly. Include possessive 'my laptop' and comma before 'usually in cafes'.

× I prefer UMM to work by typing wrapped ups.

✓ I prefer to work by typing.

The phrase contains disfluencies 'UMM' and unclear 'wrapped ups'. Remove fillers and unnecessary words. Use the simple infinitive 'prefer to work by typing' or 'prefer typing'.

× I went to type on the keyboard when I was in middle school.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in middle school.

Use 'learned to type' rather than 'went to type', which is ungrammatical. 'Learned to' correctly expresses acquisition of the skill in the past.

× Umm at that time my parents bought me laptop and and I was very surprised to the computers every aspects as I write to type and exactly the sounds.

✓ At that time my parents bought me a laptop, and I was very surprised by every aspect of computers: the typing and the sounds.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop'. 'Surprised to the computers every aspects' is incorrect; use 'surprised by every aspect of computers'. Also fix repetition 'and and' and clarify noun phrases. Use colon or comma to list examples.

× Umm I typed, I practice typing through umm words kiss and there are many fun words kiss umm enjoying umm while I type.

✓ I practice typing using fun word exercises, and I enjoy typing while I do them.

Tense and verb forms are mixed and unclear. Use present simple 'I practice' and gerund 'typing' correctly. Replace 'words kiss' with 'word exercises' or 'fun words', and use 'enjoy' with gerund 'typing'.

× So I would like to sometimes and practice typing enjoying.

✓ So I sometimes like to practice typing for fun.

Word order is incorrect and 'practice typing enjoying' is ungrammatical. Use 'like to' + infinitive or 'enjoy' + gerund. 'Sometimes like to practice typing for fun' is idiomatic and clear.