Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer typing for work but handwriting for relaxation."). Avoid repetition ("when I want to relax" twice) and incorrect pronouns ("write him" is wrong). Add one specific detail explaining why handwriting is relaxing (e.g., tactile feel, slower pace). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing for work because it's fast and efficient. However, for relaxation I like handwriting, as writing by hand feels more personal and helps me slow down. For example, I sometimes write short poems in a notebook to unwind.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear reason with concise wording. Remove hesitations and repetitions ("on my on my"). Mention a specific task to support your answer (e.g., editing, publishing). Use one linking phrase if needed.

예시: Yes. I type every day on a desktop because I work as a media editor and handle writing, editing, and publishing articles for our website.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and coherent explanation. Start with a direct answer ("I learned to type at university") then explain briefly why (e.g., courses, assignments). Avoid vague or incorrect phrases ("the handles is always on the website") and unnecessary details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to make it logical.

예시: I learned to type at university because most classes required online assignments and everyone used laptops. As a result, I practiced typing regularly for coursework and emails.

제안: Be specific about the methods you use to improve typing. Begin with a clear topic sentence ("I improve my typing by practicing regularly") and list 2–3 concrete activities, using linking words ("for example", "also"). Avoid fillers like "uh" and vague phrases like "maybe."

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly: for example, I type many university assignments and papers, I use online typing exercises to increase speed, and I also chat and take notes on my phone to build fluency.

× It depends.

✓ It depends.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct and uses the present tense appropriately to express a general preference.

× When I'm working I prefer typing because it's more convenient and sufficient.

✓ When I'm working, I prefer typing because it's more convenient and more suitable.

The original has a punctuation omission (missing comma after the introductory clause) and uses 'sufficient' incorrectly to describe convenience; 'more suitable' fits the intended meaning. Add a comma after the dependent clause for clarity and replace the adjective.

× But when I want to relax, when I want to be relaxed, I often write him some poems and some articles just for entertainment.

✓ But when I want to relax, I often write some poems and articles just for entertainment.

Problems: unnecessary repetition ('when I want to relax' and 'when I want to be relaxed') and incorrect pronoun 'him' used with 'write' (should be omitted or replaced with an indirect object if intended). Simplify to a single clause and remove 'him'. This corrects pronoun misuse (Incorrect use of pronouns) and improves sentence structure.

× Yes, like I said, I'm a media editor so I need to type every day on my on my desktop because I need to launch many articles on the website.

✓ Yes, like I said, I'm a media editor, so I need to type every day on my desktop because I need to publish many articles on the website.

Errors: repeated phrase 'on my on my' (typo/repetition) and word choice: 'launch' is awkward for posting articles; 'publish' is appropriate. Add a comma before 'so' to separate clauses. Tense and subject-verb agreement are fine.

× I think that on my university because before I entered university I was writing by hand but in university everyone use laptops and and the handles is always on the website.

✓ I think that at my university, before I entered, I wrote by hand, but at university everyone used laptops and the handles were always on the website.

Multiple errors: incorrect preposition 'on my university' should be 'at my university' (Incorrect use of prepositions), tense inconsistency—use simple past 'wrote' for past habit and 'used' for 'everyone used laptops' (Past tense issue), subject-verb agreement 'everyone use' should be 'everyone used' (Subject-verb agreement / Third person singular), repetition 'and and' is a typo, and 'the handles is always on the website' is unclear and ungrammatical—interpreted as 'the handles were always on the website' making verb agree in past. Clarify meaning if 'handles' refers to usernames; otherwise choose a clearer noun.

× You need to download it.

✓ You needed to download it.

Context: student referring to past situation at university, so past tense 'needed' matches previous sentence. If referring to a general instruction, 'need' would be fine; here consistency with past narrative suggests past tense.

× For me personally, just doing lots of assignments and writing papers and uh, maybe chatting with your friends using your cell phone.

✓ For me personally, I improve by doing lots of assignments, writing papers, and maybe chatting with friends on my cell phone.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb (Sentence without a verb) and mixes second-person 'your' with first-person context. Corrections: add a main clause 'I improve by' to complete the sentence, change 'your friends' to 'friends' to keep first person, and use 'on my cell phone' (preposition choice). Also add commas to separate items.