Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa (tenses dan kata kerja), gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, dan tambahkan detail spesifik singkat. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk kelancaran (mis. "however", "for example"). Contoh fokus: sebutkan situasi konkret ketika menulis tangan lebih baik dan kapan mengetik lebih efisien.

예시: It depends on the situation. For personal notes or brainstorming, I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember ideas better and I can sketch diagrams quickly. However, for work tasks like reports and emails, I prefer typing on a computer because it is much faster and easier to edit.

제안: Perbaiki kesesuaian tense dan pilihan kata; buat kalimat topik langsung menjawab pertanyaan. Jelaskan secara spesifik perangkat yang digunakan dan jenis tugasnya. Hindari kata-kata tidak jelas (mis. "making a leather"). Gunakan penghubung seperti "for example" dengan jelas.

예시: Yes, I type every day, mostly on a laptop because my job involves data entry and administrative tasks. For example, I use my laptop to prepare memos, process orders and update spreadsheets, which require frequent typing.

제안: Perbaiki grammar (subject-verb agreement) dan buat jawaban lebih padat: nyatakan waktu secara jelas dan jelaskan sedikit tentang isi kursus. Hindari pengisian suara (uh) dan kalimat terputus. Gunakan kata hubung seperti "and" atau "where" untuk menghubungkan ide.

예시: I learned to type when I was in junior high school. There was a computer course that taught basic typing, data entry and how to import and manage simple files, which gave me a solid foundation.

제안: Buat struktur yang lebih jelas: mulai dengan topik, lalu jelaskan metode konkret untuk meningkatkan keterampilan. Berikan contoh spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung (e.g., "for example", "also"). Perbaiki frasa seperti "the improve of the typing" menjadi "my typing improves".

예시: My typing has improved mostly through regular practice. For example, I practice with online typing tests to increase speed and accuracy, and I also type messages and work documents daily to build muscle memory.

× If I was managing something, I love to handwriting because it is easier to memorize what we have not before.

✓ If I were managing something, I prefer to handwrite because it is easier to remember things I have not remembered before.

This sentence mixes conditional mood and verb forms incorrectly. Use the subjunctive 'were' for hypothetical situations (If I were), use 'prefer' for habitual present preference instead of 'love to handwriting', and use the verb phrase 'handwrite' (verb) rather than the noun 'handwriting'. 'Memorize what we have not before' is incorrect word order and tense; use 'remember things I have not remembered before'. Suggestion: practice subjunctive with hypothetical statements, use correct verb forms and word order. Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 5 (Past tense issue) and 6 (Present tense issue), primary ID:5

× But for work I think typing in the computer is better because it works faster than handwriting.

✓ But for work I think typing on the computer is better because it is faster than handwriting.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'computer' rather than 'in'. 'Typing on the computer is better because it is faster than handwriting' uses 'it' to refer to typing (singular), so keep consistent. Suggestion: remember common prepositions with devices (on the computer, on the phone) and keep pronoun agreement. Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 1 (Singular and plural issue), primary ID:11

× Yes I did because my main job is about data and an administrative area, so I work with them every day.

✓ Yes, I do because my main job involves data and administrative tasks, so I work with them every day.

Answering a present habit should use present auxiliary 'do' not past 'did'. 'Is about data and an administrative area' is awkward; use 'involves data and administrative tasks'. Suggestion: match tense to the time frame (present habits => present simple), and use collocations like 'involves' and 'administrative tasks'. Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 5 (Past tense issue) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), primary ID:5

× Uh, for example I use laptop or computer for making a leather or the memo or the OR to process the data and everything else.

✓ For example, I use a laptop or a computer to write letters, memos, or official reports to process the data and other tasks.

Missing articles before 'laptop' and 'computer' — use 'a laptop' or 'a computer'. 'Making a leather' is incorrect collocation; likely 'writing letters'. 'the OR' is unclear; replace with 'official reports' or 'other reports' and use infinitive 'to write' or 'to process'. Suggestion: learn common collocations (write letters, write memos), use articles with singular countable nouns, and choose clear nouns. Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 22 (Article errors) and 1 (Singular and plural issue), primary ID:22

× I first learned how to type on keyboard when I were school at junior high school.

✓ I first learned how to type on the keyboard when I was in junior high school.

Use past tense 'was' with singular subject 'I' (not 'were'). Include the article 'the' before 'keyboard' and preposition 'in' before 'junior high school'. Suggestion: use 'was' for past first-person singular, and include necessary articles and prepositions for places/institutions. Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 5 (Past tense issue) and 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors), primary ID:5

× There is a course that really, uh, the main point of the course is the computer, how to type the data, how to import the data, and.

✓ There was a course whose main point was computers: how to type data and how to import data.

Original contains a fragment and repeated noun phrases; use 'there was a course whose main point was...' to create a complete sentence. Remove trailing 'and' and unnecessary articles. Suggestion: combine ideas into a single clause and avoid fragments. Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 23 (Sentence without a verb) and 22 (Article errors), primary ID:23

× I think the improve of the typing is increased naturally the more you try to typing.

✓ I think improvement in typing increases naturally the more you try typing.

Use the noun 'improvement' not 'the improve'. 'Improvement in typing increases' is a clearer subject-verb structure. Use gerund 'typing' after 'try' (try typing). Remove unnecessary articles. Suggestion: learn correct noun forms (improvement) and gerund use after 'try'. Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 8 (Verb + -ing form) and 22 (Article errors), primary ID:8

× Your muscle memory is also improved.

✓ Your muscle memory also improves.

Use simple present 'improves' to describe a general truth/habit rather than passive 'is improved' which suggests external action. Suggestion: use active simple present for general habits and processes. Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 6 (Present tense issue) and 21 (Incorrect passive voice), primary ID:6

× So I tried typing in every occasion, like typing on tags, social media and for my tasks of course.

✓ So I try to type on every occasion, like when typing tags, on social media, and for my tasks, of course.

Use present tense 'try' for habitual action instead of past 'tried'. Prefer 'try to type' or 'try typing' consistently; here 'try to type on every occasion' is natural. Use 'on social media' and 'when typing tags'. Suggestion: match tense to habitual actions and use correct prepositions for contexts (on social media). Problem mapped to Grammar Problem Type ID 6 (Present tense issue) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), primary ID:6