Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce repetition and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use accurate verbs and articles (e.g., 'lean towards', 'it's significantly faster', 'a fine handwriting' → 'handwriting is').

예시: I prefer typing for work because it is significantly faster and easier to edit. However, when I take personal notes or brainstorm ideas, I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me focus.

제안: Make a concise topic sentence and avoid filler words. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I'm often on the move') and remove confusing phrases. Give one clear supporting detail and a linking phrase.

예시: I mostly use a laptop keyboard because I'm often on the move between my office and a local café. The laptop's portability fits my lifestyle and makes it easy to work from different places.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and correct verb forms. Remove garbled words and fillers. Say one specific detail about how you learned (e.g., games, lessons) and use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: I learned to type in middle school during mandatory IT classes. I vividly remember practicing with educational typing games, which made the learning process fun and helped me improve quickly.

제안: Use present tense for routines and correct noun/verb forms (e.g., 'I mostly improve', 'online platforms', 'speed and accuracy'). Give one specific method and a result, linked clearly.

예시: I improve my typing mainly through consistent daily practice. I also use online typing platforms to work on speed and accuracy, and focusing on proper finger placement has reduced the number of typos during long writing sessions.

× 'It really depends on the the context.'

✓ 'It really depends on the context.'

'The word context is singular and already correct; the error here is a duplicated definite article "the the". Remove the repeated "the" to form a correct singular noun phrase.'

× 'For efficiency and work related tasks, I definitely learn towards typing because it\'s significant faster.'

✓ 'For efficiency and work-related tasks, I definitely lean towards typing because it\'s significantly faster.'

'work related' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective (work-related). "learn towards" is incorrect word choice; the correct verb is "lean towards". "significant" is an adjective but adverb "significantly" is required to modify the comparative "faster". Use "significantly faster".'

× 'However, for personal notes or creating brainstorming a fine handwriting to be much more therapeutic and personal.'

✓ 'However, for personal notes or brainstorming, a fine handwriting style can be much more therapeutic and personal.'

Sentence had several issues: unnecessary "creating" before "brainstorming" and missing article and verb structure. Add article "a" and verb "can be" to form a complete clause. "handwriting" is better specified as "handwriting style".'

× 'I predominantly use my laptop keyboard on a daily basis since I'm are often on the movie on the move between my office and local cafe.'

✓ 'I predominantly use my laptop keyboard on a daily basis since I am often on the move between my office and a local cafe.'

'I'm are' is a redundant combination of contractions and the auxiliary; use either "I'm" or "I am". "on the movie" is incorrect; correct phrase is "on the move". Add the article "a" before "local cafe".'

× 'The, uh, portability of a laptop is absolutely in this way this band sable for my current lifestyle and workflows.'

✓ 'The portability of a laptop is absolutely suitable for my current lifestyle and workflow.'

Phrase contains many incorrect or garbled words: remove filler "uh", replace "in this way this band sable" with "suitable". Use singular "workflow" or plural consistently; "workflow" fits better here. Remove unnecessary commas.'

× 'I first speak of timing skills bad in the middle school during an hour a mandatory IT classes.'

✓ 'I first learned typing skills in middle school during a mandatory IT class.'

'speak of timing skills bad' is ungrammatical; intended past action requires past tense "learned". Use correct noun "typing skills". "middle school" does not need "the" in general statement. Use singular "class" after "a mandatory".'

× 'I vital vividly remember practicing talk typing through VI various educational games, which make the whole learning process quite a quick uh.'

✓ 'I vividly remember practicing typing through various educational games, which made the whole learning process quite quick.'

Remove extraneous words "vital", "talk", "VI" which seem incorrect. Use past-tense "made" to match 'remember practicing' referring to a past completed learning process. Remove filler "uh" and redundant adverb placement; "vividly" before "remember" is correct.'

× 'To be honest, I mostly improved through consistent daily use.'

✓ 'To be honest, I mostly improve through consistent daily use.'

The question asks how the student improves typing (present habitual). Use present simple "improve" for habitual action rather than past "improved" which indicates a completed action.'

× 'However, I occasionally used online platform to enhance my speak and accuracies.'

✓ 'However, I occasionally use online platforms to enhance my speed and accuracy.'

Use present simple "use" for habitual action. "platform" should be plural "platforms" or "a platform"; plural fits general statement. "speak" is incorrect; intended word is "speed". "accuracies" should be singular mass noun "accuracy".'

× 'I find that focusing on my finger placement have me reduce the number of top typos I made during long writing sections.'

✓ 'I find that focusing on my finger placement helps me reduce the number of top typos I make during long writing sessions.'

Subject-verb agreement: singular subject "focusing" requires singular verb "helps" (or "has helped"). Use infinitive structure "helps me reduce". Change "I made" to present simple "I make" to match habitual context. Use "writing sessions" rather than "sections'.'