Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using a linking word. Replace informal fillers ("like", "you can call me lazy") with more natural phrasing and a wider range of vocabulary.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more accurate. For example, my phone’s autocorrect and predictive text help me avoid mistakes, which saves time when I’m messaging or taking notes.

제안: Avoid informal slang and repetition. Give a direct answer then support it with a reason or brief example using a linking word. Use one clear sentence for the main point and a second sentence for support.

예시: I mostly type on my phone rather than a desktop or laptop because it’s more convenient. For instance, I use my phone for social media, messaging and quick emails throughout the day.

제안: Be direct and avoid long, unfocused sentences. Give a clear time reference or brief description and one specific detail. Remove vague phrases and fillers ("you know", "but yeah"). Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I never had formal lessons; I picked up keyboard typing in my early teens. At first I learned by imitation, watching fast typists online, and gradually improved through regular practice.

제안: Provide a more developed answer with a linking phrase and a concrete method. Start with a topic sentence and then give a specific example of how you practise to show progression and effort.

예시: I improve my typing by practising every day and using typing apps to track my speed and accuracy. For example, I spend 10–15 minutes daily on a typing tutor that gives exercises and records my progress.

× You can call me lazy but I definitely prefer typing because when I'm typing on my phone I get like auto corrections and it's easier that way than handwriting.

✓ You can call me lazy, but I definitely prefer typing because when I type on my phone I get autocorrections and it's easier that way than handwriting.

The sentence mixes verb forms and informal filler 'like'. Change 'when I'm typing' to 'when I type' for simple present to describe a habitual action; 'auto corrections' should be one word 'autocorrections'. Also add a comma before 'but' to join independent clauses. Remove 'like' as a filler. Use pronoun and verb consistency for clarity.

× Definitely not, I mostly type on my phone. I'm so I'm a Gen. Z so my phone all the way.

✓ Definitely not, I mostly type on my phone. I'm Gen Z, so I always use my phone.

The original sentence has redundancy and awkward phrasing. 'I'm so I'm a Gen. Z so my phone all the way' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'I'm Gen Z, so I always use my phone.' This fixes pronoun/reference clarity and uses correct adverb placement ('always use') for habitual action.

× I never really learnt how to type on a keyboard, it just came to me naturally and it was very interesting to see people typing very fast on the keyboard and I just, you know, fell in love with the acts because I think it's art, but yeah.

✓ I never really learned how to type on a keyboard; it just came to me naturally. It was interesting to see people typing very fast on the keyboard, and I just fell in love with the activity because I think it's an art.

Use consistent past tense and clearer word choice. 'Learnt' is acceptable British English, but 'learned' is more common in American English; choose consistently. Split run-on sentence into two for clarity. Replace 'the acts' with 'the activity' and add 'an' before 'art'. Remove filler 'you know' and unnecessary 'but yeah' for formal correctness.

× Typing everyday is already me improving my typing skills cause practice make perfect.

✓ Typing every day already helps me improve my typing skills because practice makes perfect.

Use 'every day' as two words for frequency. Reorder to natural English: 'already helps me improve' rather than 'is already me improving'. Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'practice makes perfect' (singular 'practice' with 'makes').