Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and natural by using a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and one brief exception with a linking word. Avoid redundancy and long phrases like "considering that" and "as compared to."

예시: I prefer typing because it’s faster and makes it easy to correct mistakes. However, I sometimes handwrite cards and personal letters because they feel more thoughtful and personal.

제안: Start with a direct statement about frequency, then give a specific reason and a concise example. Remove vague phrases like "lots of document preparations and stuff" and avoid repeating words ("would be using").

예시: I usually type on a laptop during the workweek, though not every single day. For example, I use it about five times a day to write reports and prepare documents for my job.

제안: Combine short fragmented sentences into one clear answer. Give a precise time and a specific reason. Avoid small hesitations like "If my memory serves me right" and correct grammar ("paperworks" → "paperwork").

예시: I learned to type at an early age — around grade 5 or 6 — because we had to prepare school paperwork that needed to be printed.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence then add a specific practice method and a brief result or benefit. Avoid general phrases and minor grammar errors ("every other skills" → "every other skill").

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, mainly through daily report writing and online typing exercises. As a result, my speed and accuracy have steadily improved.

× I often type using a laptop keyboard, but not really everyday.

✓ I often type using a laptop keyboard, but not really every day.

The error is an adverb/word form issue: 'everyday' (one word) is an adjective meaning ordinary, while the correct adverbial phrase is 'every day' (two words) meaning 'each day'. Replace 'everyday' with 'every day' to indicate frequency. Also keep 'not really' if you mean 'not literally every day'; consider 'but not literally every day' for clarity.

× I would say I would be using my laptop five times a day or during weekdays as my work requires me to prepare lots of document preparations and stuff.

✓ I would say I use my laptop five times a day on weekdays, as my work requires me to prepare many documents and other materials.

This sentence has tense/modal redundancy and word-choice issues. Using 'I would say I would be using' is unnecessarily conditional; 'I would say I use' is clearer. 'During weekdays' is better as 'on weekdays'. 'Lots of document preparations' is awkward and repetitive; use 'many documents' or 'document preparation'. Avoid vague 'stuff' and replace with 'other materials' or a specific phrase.

× I learned to type using a keyboard at an early age. If my memory serves me right.

✓ I learned to type using a keyboard at an early age, if my memory serves me right.

'If my memory serves me right.' is a sentence fragment when separated; it should be attached to the previous sentence with a comma or rewritten as a full sentence: 'If my memory serves me right, I was in grade 5 or 6.' Here we combine it for grammatical completeness and flow.

× I think I was in grade 5 or 6 when I started practicing typing on a keyboard as we had to prepare school related paperworks which requires printing.

✓ I think I was in grade 5 or 6 when I started practicing typing on a keyboard, as we had to prepare school-related paperwork that required printing.

Multiple issues: 'school related' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective: 'school-related'. 'Paperworks' is incorrect—'paperwork' is an uncountable noun. 'Which requires' mixes tenses; since referring to past, use 'that required'. Also add a comma before 'as' for clarity.

× Well, just like every other skills, I improve typing by practicing often.

✓ Well, just like every other skill, I improve my typing by practicing often.

'Every other skills' is incorrect because 'every' requires a singular noun: 'every other skill'. 'Improve typing' is understandable but better as 'improve my typing' to include the possessive. This fixes subject-verb agreement and article/pronoun usage.

× I practice almost every day as my work necessitates me to type my reports.

✓ I practice almost every day because my work requires me to type reports.

'Necessitates me to' is not standard; use 'requires me to' or 'necessitates' followed by a noun ('necessitates typing reports'). Also 'my reports' is okay but 'type reports' is more natural. Replace 'as' with 'because' for clearer cause-and-effect in spoken English.