Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Trình bày câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp; dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý. Cụ thể: 1) Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer handwriting.) 2) Giải thích lý do bằng 1–2 câu hỗ trợ, tránh câu dài, lặp từ (‘hand write’ -> ‘handwrite’; ‘doctor book’ không phù hợp). 3) Thêm ví dụ ngắn gọn, cụ thể. Ngoài ra sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như “take in my memory longer” -> “stay in my memory longer”.

예시: I prefer handwriting. It helps me take quick notes and I remember information better when I handwrite. For example, after I handwrite a lecture summary, the main points stay in my memory longer than when I type them.

제안: Cải thiện: Sử dụng câu ngắn, chính xác và sửa lỗi từ/cách dùng số. Cụ thể: 1) Tránh viết tắt hoặc số thay từ (ví dụ “bought 1” -> “bought one” hoặc “bought a laptop”). 2) Kết hợp liên từ để câu mạch lạc (because, so, and). 3) Thêm chi tiết ngắn về tần suất để tăng cụ thể.

예시: I usually type on a laptop because it is lightweight and easy to carry. I bought a laptop recently because laptops are more affordable, so I use it at home and in cafés when I need to write reports or check emails.

제안: Cải thiện: Sửa ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, dùng từ phù hợp (computer class, exercises, accuracy). Cụ thể: 1) Bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I learned to type in primary school.) 2) Sửa các cụm từ sai (“computer less” -> “computer class”; “simple exercise” -> “simple exercises”). 3) Kết luận ngắn gọn về lợi ích. Hạn chế dùng từ không đúng như “speech” nếu ý là tốc độ.

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary school during computer class. Practicing simple exercises in Microsoft Word helped me improve my typing speed and accuracy, which made completing assignments and later work tasks much easier.

제안: Cải thiện: Sửa lỗi cấu trúc câu, chính tả và dùng từ phù hợp (interactive, typing tests). Cụ thể: 1) Viết câu rõ ràng: subject + verb + object. 2) Dùng từ chính xác: “interactive timed exercises”, “typing tests”. 3) Liệt kê nguồn tham khảo ngắn gọn và mạch lạc, tránh tên kém rõ ràng. 4) Thêm một câu kết về kết quả cải thiện (e.g. increased speed by X).

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day with online tutorials and interactive timed exercises to increase speed and accuracy. For example, I follow a YouTube channel called SamTalk Digits and use online typing tests regularly to monitor my progress.

× I prefer handwriting because it's more convenient for me to take notes in your doctor book than on the laptop, and I tend to remember information better when I write it by hand.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it's more convenient for me to take notes in my notebook than on the laptop, and I tend to remember information better when I write by hand.

The phrase 'in your doctor book' uses incorrect noun and preposition; likely meant 'my notebook'. Also 'write it by hand' is reduced to 'write by hand' for natural English. Suggestion: use appropriate possessive and common noun (my notebook) and omit unnecessary pronoun 'it' after 'write'. ID:11

× For example, after I hand write a summary of a lecture, the main points take in my memory longer than when I type the same notes.

✓ For example, after I handwrite a summary of a lecture, the main points stay in my memory longer than when I type the same notes.

'Hand write' should be one word 'handwrite' or 'write by hand'. 'Take in my memory' is incorrect collocation; use 'stay in my memory' or 'remain in my memory'. Suggestion: use correct verb collocations and compound verbs written as single words when appropriate. ID:10

× I usually type on the laptop because it's lightweight and very convenient to carry.

✓ I usually type on a laptop because it's lightweight and very convenient to carry.

Using 'the laptop' implies a specific known laptop; general preference requires indefinite article 'a laptop'. Also matches singular/plural article usage. Suggestion: use 'a laptop' for general statements. ID:1

× Since laptops have become more affordable, I bought 1 to work from home or to take to cafes when I need to write reports or check emails.

✓ Since laptops have become more affordable, I bought one to work from home or to take to cafes when I need to write reports or check emails.

The numeral '1' is inappropriate in formal writing; write 'one' as a word. Also 'bought one' matches quantifier usage. Suggestion: use words for small numbers in sentences and ensure consistency. ID:14

× I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school doing a computer less.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school during computer lessons.

'Doing a computer less' is incorrect: 'computer lesson' is the correct noun; plural 'lessons' fits typical schooling. Use 'during' or 'in' to indicate time period. Suggestion: use correct noun 'computer lessons' and appropriate time preposition 'during'. ID:11

× Practicing simple exercise in Microsoft Word helped me improve my typing, speech, and accuracy with data.

✓ Practicing simple exercises in Microsoft Word helped me improve my typing speed, accuracy, and data-handling skills.

Singular 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises'. 'Speech' is out of context; likely meant 'speed'. 'Accuracy with data' is awkward; better 'accuracy' or 'data-handling skills'. Suggestion: ensure parallel items in a list and choose words that fit the context. ID:26

× Make it easier to complete school assignments and work tasks.

✓ This made it easier to complete school assignments and work tasks.

The original is a fragment lacking a clear subject and proper tense. Context indicates a past result, so 'This made it easier...' completes the sentence. Suggestion: attach fragments to preceding sentence or add subject and verb. ID:23

× I improve my typing my practice thing every day with online tutorials and interacting timed exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day with online tutorials and interactive timed exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

'my practice thing' is ungrammatical; use 'by practicing'. 'Interacting timed exercises' should be 'interactive timed exercises'. Suggestion: use 'by' + gerund to describe method and correct adjective forms. ID:15

× For example, a YouTube channel called Samtalk Digits, youphone tickets and I also take regular typing texts to monitor my progress.

✓ For example, a YouTube channel called Samtalk Digits and YouPhone Tips, and I also take regular typing tests to monitor my progress.

List structure is incorrect and contains typos: 'youphone tickets' likely 'YouPhone Tips'. 'Typing texts' should be 'typing tests'. Use 'and' to join items and correct nouns. Suggestion: proofread proper nouns and use correct vocabulary. ID:11