Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and grammatically correct, give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "you fit the effectively."

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more efficient. For example, I can write long essays or emails much quicker on a keyboard, which saves me time when I have deadlines. Therefore, typing is a more practical tool for my daily work.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar. Use linking words (because, so) and more precise vocabulary (require efficiency, finish tasks quickly). Avoid adverbs like "fastly."

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day because my job requires mobility and efficiency. Since most of my work involves emails and reports, typing on a laptop helps me complete tasks quickly and meet tight deadlines.

제안: Answer directly with a clear time reference, then add one short specific detail. Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing; avoid irrelevant phrases like "That's an interesting story" unless you follow with a brief anecdote.

예시: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old at a summer camp. There I practiced typing to chat and complete computer exercises, which helped me build basic typing skills early on.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence describing the method, then one concrete detail about how you practice. Use correct sentence structure and linking words (for example, by, during). Avoid fragments like "I chapter online."

예시: I improve my typing by practicing with online typing courses and timed exercises. For example, during last summer vacation I completed daily 20-minute drills on a typing website, which noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it's you fit the effectively.

✓ I prefer typing because it helps me be more effective.

The original sentence uses incorrect words and word order. 'you fit the effectively' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'it helps me be more effective' to express that typing improves effectiveness. Use the adjective 'effective' with 'more' for comparison and correct pronoun/reference 'it' for typing.

× I can spend less time to type a lot of words.

✓ I can spend less time typing a lot of words.

After expressions like 'spend time', use the -ing form of the verb (gerund). 'to type' is incorrect here. Change to 'typing' to follow correct verb pattern.

× It's a good tool to.

✓ It's a good tool.

The phrase 'to' at the end is unnecessary and ungrammatical. Remove 'to' to complete the sentence: 'It's a good tool.'

× I type on laptop keyboard every day because I have a lot of work to do.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have a lot of work to do.

Before 'laptop keyboard' use the indefinite article 'a' because it's a singular countable noun and not specific. 'a laptop keyboard' is correct.

× They request efficiency.

✓ It requires efficiency.

The pronoun 'They' has no clear antecedent. The intended subject is the work or job context (singular), so use 'It requires efficiency.' Also change verb to match singular subject (requires). Alternatively, 'My tasks require efficiency.'

× Typing helps me to finish these jobs fastly.

✓ Typing helps me finish these jobs quickly.

After 'helps' the infinitive can omit 'to' (helps me finish) or keep 'to', but 'fastly' is not a correct adverb; use 'quickly' or 'fast'. Use 'quickly' for formal correctness.

× When I was a student, maybe 12 years old, when I entered camps, I types for chat.

✓ When I was a student, around 12 years old, when I entered camps, I typed to chat.

'types' is incorrect tense and form for past events; use past tense 'typed'. Also adjust word order: 'typed to chat' or better 'typed to chat with others'. 'maybe' should be 'around' for clarity.

× That's an interesting story.

✓ That's an interesting story.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It serves as a correct introductory remark.

× I chapter online.

✓ I took a typing course online.

'I chapter online' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended meaning is attending lessons or a course online. Use 'took a typing course online' (past tense if referring to completed action). Choose tense to match context.

× During a summer vacation which helped me type faster than before.

✓ During a summer vacation, I took lessons that helped me type faster than before.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and subject in the relative clause. Add subject and verb: 'I took lessons that helped me...' to make a complete sentence and clearly link the action to the result.