Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference or balanced view, then add one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words (e.g., "however", "also") and avoid repetition. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing for speed and convenience; however, handwriting is more personal and satisfying. For example, typing lets me finish an essay quickly when I have limited time, while writing by hand helps me remember ideas because I can feel the paper and take my time.

제안: Organize your answer into a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Use linking words to explain circumstances (e.g., "at work", "when I am at home"). Avoid unnecessary repetition and correct tense and article errors.

예시: Yes, I type every day. At work I use a desktop to prepare printed plans and documents, while at home I usually use my laptop to continue my tasks. So both devices are part of my daily routine.

제안: Respond with a clear timeline and avoid awkward phrases. Use one sentence to state when you learned and another to explain how. Replace vague words like "puberty" with "my teens" and correct tense consistency.

예시: I taught myself to type when I was a teenager. I practiced regularly and took some typing tests to measure my progress, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence then specific details about the method and results. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing for how the game worked and the benefits. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I improved my typing mainly by playing a typing game in which you type words quickly to defeat enemies. I played it regularly, which forced me to focus on spelling and timing and significantly increased both my speed and accuracy.

× Typing do have some advantage.

✓ Typing does have some advantages.

Subject 'Typing' is singular, so auxiliary 'do' should be 'does' (third person singular). Also 'advantage' should be plural 'advantages' to match the general statement. Suggestion: use 'does have' and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× I can write an essay in a minute and but sometimes handwriting has its own character.

✓ I can write an essay in a minute, but sometimes handwriting has its own character.

The original used both 'and' and 'but' together, causing a conjunction error. Remove the extra conjunction and use a comma before 'but' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: choose a single coordinating conjunction appropriate to the contrast ('but').

× You can feel the feel, you can feel the texture or the paper and it may give me a sense of achievement.

✓ You can feel the feel, you can feel the texture of the paper and it may give you a sense of achievement.

Pronouns must agree with the subject and listener. The sentence shifts between 'you' and 'me'; maintain 'you' throughout since the sentence addresses the listener. Also 'of the paper' is correct preposition usage. Suggestion: keep consistent pronouns and correct prepositions.

× Due to my job I have to type on the desktop in today I went to company to type some to type for some content of the print of the plan and like come back to home I have to use my laptop so I use it every day.

✓ Due to my job, I have to type on the desktop. Today I went to the company to type some content for the printed plan, and when I come back home I use my laptop, so I use it every day.

Multiple issues: verb forms and sentence structure. 'In today' is incorrect; use 'Today'. 'Company' needs article 'the company'. 'To type some to type for some content of the print of the plan' is redundant and ungrammatical — rephrased to 'type some content for the printed plan'. 'Come back to home' should be 'come back home'. Ensure correct tense and clear clause separation. Suggestion: split into shorter sentences and use appropriate articles and prepositions.

× To be honest, no one taught me typing so I have to study it by myself and I study it when I was puberty and I have some tests to use use the keyboard to type.

✓ To be honest, no one taught me to type, so I had to study it by myself. I studied it when I was in puberty, and I had some tests to practice using the keyboard to type.

Tense consistency: narrative about the past should use past tense ('had to', 'studied', 'had'). 'Taught me typing' is awkward; use 'taught me to type'. 'When I was puberty' should be 'when I was in puberty' or better 'when I was a teenager'. Remove duplicate 'use'. Suggestion: keep past events in past tense and use correct infinitive forms.

× It was the typing game where you play as a cowboy and when you type the correct words you should talk it.

✓ It was a typing game where you play as a cowboy, and when you type the correct words you should shoot it.

The original 'talk it' is incorrect verb choice for a cowboy typing game; likely intended 'shoot it'. Also 'the typing game' can be 'a typing game' unless referring to a specific one. Use appropriate verbs that match meaning. Suggestion: choose verbs that fit the context and use the correct article.

× I play it regularly in the past and it has helped me improve my typing speed and accuracy because it forced me to focus on spelling and timing.

✓ I played it regularly in the past, and it helped me improve my typing speed and accuracy because it forced me to focus on spelling and timing.

Mixing present 'has helped' with 'in the past' is inconsistent. Use simple past 'played' and 'helped' to keep past narrative. 'Has helped' could be used if emphasizing present result, but then avoid 'in the past'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense when describing past habits and their effects.