Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and use clearer topic sentence, add one specific reason for each preference and a linking word to compare them. Avoid filler words like “well” and keep to maximum 3–4 short sentences.

예시: I prefer both typing and handwriting for different purposes. For quick messages I type because it’s fast and convenient, whereas for birthdays I handwrite letters to make them feel more personal. Therefore, I choose based on the situation.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence and avoid hesitation and repetition. Specify which apps or platforms you use and give a brief reason why you prefer your phone over computers. Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences.

예시: I usually type on my phone rather than on a desktop or laptop. For example, I use WhatsApp and Instagram because they are convenient when I am out. As a result, I rarely use a computer keyboard daily.

제안: Start with a clear time reference, then provide a concise method of learning using linking words. Remove hedging phrases like “kind of” and include a specific detail about what you learned from the videos.

예시: I learned to type when I first bought my laptop about three years ago. I learned mainly from YouTube videos, which taught me proper finger placement and common typing exercises to build speed.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and add specific methods and frequency. Use linking words to show steps and avoid repeating the word “practice.” Keep to two sentences with concrete examples of exercises or apps.

예시: I improve my typing by doing short daily exercises on websites like TypingClub and by practicing for 20 minutes each day. In addition, I use timed tests to measure progress and focus on accuracy before speed.

× If I want to text my friend then I prefer typing, and if it's her birthday or a very special occasion then I like handwriting letters.

✓ If I want to text my friend, I prefer typing; if it is her birthday or a very special occasion, I like handwriting letters.

The original sentence had informal conjunctions and punctuation issues rather than a pronoun error; however 'it's' is acceptable contraction for 'it is'. Correction improves clarity by adding commas and a semicolon and expanding contraction for formality. Suggestion: use proper punctuation to separate clauses and consider expanding contractions in formal speech.

× Not really, I type on my phone, I use umm different kind of platforms to communicate with people through typing and I all I do this on my phone.

✓ Not really. I type on my phone. I use different kinds of platforms to communicate with people through typing, and I do all of this on my phone.

There are several issues: run-on sentence, incorrect quantifier 'different kind' (should be 'different kinds' or 'different kinds of'), and awkward phrase 'I all I do this'. Corrections split into shorter sentences, change 'different kind of platforms' to 'different kinds of platforms', and 'I do all of this' for correct pronoun and verb order. Suggestion: avoid run-on sentences, choose correct plural forms for 'kind(s) of', and use clear subject-verb structure.

× When I first bought my laptop I started typing on my keyboard and I kind of learned it through YouTube videos that how to place my fingers on keyboard and type.

✓ When I first bought my laptop, I started typing on my keyboard, and I learned how to place my fingers on the keyboard and type through YouTube videos.

Problems include extra filler 'kind of learned', incorrect word order 'that how to', missing articles before 'keyboard', and punctuation. Correction uses simple past consistently ('bought', 'started', 'learned'), removes filler, places 'how' correctly after 'learned', and adds the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, avoid unnecessary fillers, and use correct question-word order after verbs like 'learned'.

× Through practicing, you should practice a lot to improve to become fast and fluent in typing.

✓ By practicing, you should practice a lot to become fast and fluent in typing.

The phrase 'Through practicing' is acceptable but 'by practicing' is more natural; redundant 'to improve to become' is incorrect. Correction removes redundancy and uses infinitive 'to become'. Suggestion: avoid repeating verbs and choose one clear structure (either 'to improve' or 'to become'); use 'by + -ing' for method and 'to + verb' for purpose.