Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and direct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid vague phrases and repetition, and add one brief specific reason with a linking word. Keep to under five sentences.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster for me. For example, after years of practice typing on phones and computers, I can finish notes quickly, which saves time when I'm studying.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and incomplete endings, and give one specific example with a linking word to support your point.

예시: I type every day on a laptop because I use it for my coursework. For instance, when I attend online lectures I type notes in a document so I can review them later.

제안: Give a concise direct answer followed by a specific supporting detail; avoid irrelevant words and unclear references. Use linking words to connect the reason or memory.

예시: I learned to type in primary school. I remember it was exciting because I had never used a keyboard before, and the teacher showed us basic touch-typing techniques.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, then list one or two specific methods with linking words. Be concise and use relevant vocabulary rather than vague phrases.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing exercises and taking a weekly class. In addition, I sometimes practice by typing chat messages with friends to build speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because it's more convenient for me as a person who has already tapped for 20 years.

✓ I prefer typing because it's more convenient for me as a person who has already typed for 20 years.

The verb 'tap' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'type'. This is a present perfect meaning (have already typed) describing experience up to now, so use the past participle 'typed'. Suggestion: replace 'tapped' with 'typed' to accurately convey typing experience.

× Kind of already saved up my time.

✓ It has kind of already saved me time.

Original fragment is not a complete or natural sentence. 'Saved up my time' is awkward; use 'saved me time'. Also add a subject and auxiliary verb: 'It has kind of already saved me time.' Suggestion: make it a complete clause and use natural collocation 'save someone time'.

× I tap for umm, a laptop, because I need to study on my laptop.

✓ I type on a laptop because I need to study on it.

The verb 'tap' is incorrect; use 'type'. Also 'study on my laptop' is fine but repeating 'laptop' is redundant; use pronoun 'it'. Use present simple 'type' for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'type on a laptop' and avoid repetition.

× For example, when I need to to take down my writing notes, I will tap on the.

✓ For example, when I need to take down my notes, I will type them on my laptop.

Original has a typo 'to to' and ends abruptly 'tap on the.' It lacks a clear object and correct verb. Use 'take down my notes' and future intention 'I will type them on my laptop.' Suggestion: remove duplicate 'to', use 'type' and include the object and device.

× I learned how to type in the primary school.

✓ I learned how to type in primary school.

Article 'the' is unnecessary before 'primary school' in this general sense. Use simple past 'learned' is correct. Suggestion: omit 'the' when referring to school in general.

× I remember it's a really exciting experience because I never use keyboard. Samsung.

✓ I remember it was a really exciting experience because I had never used a keyboard.

Mixes present and past incorrectly. 'Remember' introduces a past event, so use past tense 'it was' and past perfect 'had never used' to show prior lack of experience. Also need the article 'a' before 'keyboard', and remove stray 'Samsung.' Suggestion: use consistent past tenses and include articles.

× There are a lot of ways to improve it and I think it's really interesting to type with your friends about daily life contact and I also take some classes.

✓ There are a lot of ways to improve it. I think it's really interesting to chat with friends about daily life, and I also take some classes.

Sentence is long and awkward. 'Type with your friends about daily life contact' is unnatural; use 'chat with friends about daily life' or 'type messages to friends about daily life.' Also split into two sentences for clarity. 'I also take some classes' is fine in present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('chat with friends') and break into clearer sentences.