Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and repetition.

예시: I prefer typing because I study engineering and use computers for most of my coursework. However, handwriting is still useful for quick notes and sketches, so I use both depending on the situation.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then give one clear reason and a brief example. Remove repetitions and hesitations; use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example'.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I do most of my homework and projects on my laptop. For example, I usually write reports and code assignments directly on my laptop.

제안: Give a clear time statement and a concise supporting detail. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and repeated phrases. Use linking words such as 'when' or 'because' to connect ideas.

예시: I learned to type when I was in sixth grade, during a new computer class at school. That course taught basic typing and computer skills, which helped me practice regularly.

제안: Answer directly with a clear method and specific details. State frequency and tools you use, and remove hesitations. Use linking words like 'so' or 'by' to explain purpose.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing daily: I type one or two short paragraphs each day and use an online typing test to monitor my speed and accuracy. This way I can focus on reducing errors and increasing speed over time.

× I prefer typing because I'm a student of.

✓ I prefer typing because I am a student.

The phrase 'student of' is incomplete and creates a sentence structure error (type 26). Remove the preposition to produce a complete statement: 'I am a student.' Alternatively specify the field after 'student of' (for example, 'student of engineering').

× I'm an engineer student, so I have to work on computer, so I must prefer that typing is best for me on.

✓ I'm an engineering student, so I have to work on a computer, so I prefer typing because it is best for me.

Multiple issues: 'engineer student' is an incorrect adjective form; use 'engineering student' (type 13). 'work on computer' needs an article 'a' (article error type 22). 'must prefer that typing is best for me on' is ungrammatical (sentence structure type 26) and misuses 'must prefer' (modal verb issue type 4). Simplify to 'I prefer typing because it is best for me.'

× But on the other side, I also think that handwriting is also important for my daily routine.

✓ However, I also think that handwriting is important for my daily routine.

'But on the other side' is an awkward conjunctional phrase (type 16). Use 'However' or 'On the other hand.' Also avoid repeating 'also' twice (adjective/adverb misuse type 13).

× I type on laptop keyboard on every day because I if I get some homework from from from my class or I if I have some project which I have to do in my laptop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because if I get homework from my class or if I have a project that I need to do on my laptop, I use it.

Errors include missing article before 'laptop keyboard' (type 22), incorrect word order 'on every day' (adverb placement type 20), repeated filler words 'from from from' (sentence structure type 26), and incorrect preposition 'in my laptop' should be 'on my laptop' (preposition error type 11). Also streamline clauses for clarity.

× I type on laptop keyboard on every day because I if I get some homework from from from my class or I if I have some project which I have to do in my laptop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because if I get homework from my class or if I have a project to do on my laptop, I use it.

The adverbial phrase 'every day' should follow the verb phrase, not 'on every day' (type 20). Also fix preposition 'in my laptop' to 'on my laptop' (type 11) and remove repetition.

× So at the time I use laptop and at that time I use keyboard and all all the things which I have to mark.

✓ So I use my laptop and its keyboard whenever I need to do those tasks.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical (type 26). 'All all the things which I have to mark' is unclear; rephrase to 'those tasks' for clarity. Add possessive 'my laptop' and 'its keyboard.'

× I learned to tap on a keyboard when I, uh, when I was in 6th grade, uh, at that time, in my, uh, the, at that time I got new class, uh, new period of computer class.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in sixth grade, when we started a new computer class period.

Use 'learned to type' rather than 'learned to tap' for natural collocation (vocabulary but also sentence structure type 26). Remove filler words and correct ordinal '6th' to 'sixth' for formal writing. Simplify redundancy 'at that time' repeated. 'Got new class, new period of computer class' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'we started a new computer class period.'

× So at the time I used how to type on keyboard in computer.

✓ So at that time I learned how to type on the computer keyboard.

The original uses incorrect verb form and word order (type 10 and 26). Use 'learned how to type' and include the article 'the' before 'computer keyboard' (article/preposition errors 22/11). Place modifiers in correct order: 'computer keyboard.'

× Uh, I improve my typing, uh, with, uh, more and more practice.

✓ I improve my typing with more and more practice.

Remove filler 'uh' for clarity. The present simple 'I improve' is acceptable for habitual action (type 6), so keep tense but make sentence concise.

× I usually I daily, uh, write up one to two paragraph or day and I check my typing speed there, which is accurate or non accurate so that I can, uh, clear that my.

✓ Usually I write one to two paragraphs a day and check my typing speed to see whether it is accurate so that I can improve.

Multiple issues: duplicated adverbs 'usually I daily' (type 13/20); 'write up' should be 'write' and 'one to two paragraph' needs plural 'paragraphs' (singular/plural issue type 1). 'or day' wrong order, should be 'a day' (article/type 22). 'Which is accurate or non accurate' is awkward; use 'to see whether it is accurate.' Final fragment 'so that I can, uh, clear that my' is incomplete (sentence structure type 26). Fix by making a complete purpose clause 'so that I can improve.'