Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Та илүү тод, логик бүтэцтэй, илэрхий үгээр хэлэх хэрэгтэй. Эхэнд товч хариулт өгөөд (I prefer handwriting.) дараа нь 1–2 өгүүлбэрээр тодруулж, жишээ болон шалтгааныг заавал холбоос үгээр холбож хэлээрэй (for example, because/so/therefore). Мөр давтах ("I I") ба дүрмийн буруу хэлбэрүүдээ сайжруулна уу.

예시: I prefer handwriting. I find that writing by hand helps me remember new words better, because the physical act of forming letters makes vocabulary more familiar. For example, when I learn a new word I write it several times and that helps me recall it later.

제안: Хариулт нь тодорхой, гэвч өгүүлбэрийн дүрэм, үг эвлүүлэлт (word choice) дээр анхаараарай. Анхны талбар дээр "a desktop computer" гэх мэт тодорхой өгүүлбэрийг зөв хэлж, холбоос үг (however/but/so) зөв ашигла. Мөн "which is softer"-г илүү тодруулж, шалтгааныг нэг өгүүлбэрээр нэмж өгөөрэй.

예시: I use a desktop computer at home and a laptop at work, so I use both every day. I prefer the laptop keyboard because its keys are softer and more comfortable for long typing sessions.

제안: Цаг хугацаа болон үйл явдлыг илүү цэгцтэй, товчоор хэлэх хэрэгтэй. Тухайн үеийн дүрмийг зөв хэрэглэ (past tense) ба давтах үгсийг арилгаж, холбоос үгээр шалтгаан/хэрхэн өөрчлөгдсөнийг тайлбарла. Жишээ нь 'about 20 years ago' гэж эхлээд, дараагийн өгүүлбэрт хэрхэн сайжирснаа нэг хоёр үгээр тайлбарлахад хангалттай.

예시: I learned to type about 20 years ago when I first started using computers. At first I only used a few fingers, but with practice over the years my typing technique and speed gradually improved.

제안: Хариулт нь агуулга болон жишээг өгсөн ч дүрмийн алдаа (tense, comparative) болон давтагдлыг зас. Сэдвийг товч, логик дарааллаар тайлбарлаж, “because”, "for example" зэрэг холбоос үг ашигла. Ямар дадал зуршлууд тусалсныг нарийвчлан хэлбэл илүү сайн.

예시: I improved my typing by practicing a lot. For example, as a student I typed my thesis and many reports, so over time my speed and accuracy increased. I also focused on proper finger placement and regular practice sessions to get faster.

× Personally I prefer handwriting rather than typing because when I I use handwriting, the words getting familiar to me and it's useful for learning new words and also handwriting. Umm.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting to typing because when I use handwriting, the words become familiar to me and it is useful for learning new words and practicing handwriting.

The sentence contains pronoun repetition ('I I') and awkward phrasing. Replace 'rather than' with 'to' after 'prefer' for correct collocation. Use 'when I use handwriting' (correct pronoun use) and change 'the words getting familiar to me' to 'the words become familiar to me' to fix tense and verb form. Also change 'it's useful for learning new words and also handwriting' to 'it is useful for learning new words and practicing handwriting' for clarity and parallel structure.

× I use desktop computer at my home, but at the workplace I do have a laptop.

✓ I use a desktop computer at home, but at work I also have a laptop.

Missing article before 'desktop computer' (article error) and slightly unnatural phrasing 'at my home' and 'at the workplace'. Use 'a desktop computer' and 'at home' or 'at work'. 'Do have' is unnecessary; simple present 'have' is correct. This corrects article and verb usage.

× So every day I use both of them, but I most like the laptop keyboard which is softer.

✓ So every day I use both of them, but I prefer the laptop keyboard because it is softer.

'I most like' is incorrect; use 'I prefer' for present habitual preference. 'Which is softer' is a non-defining clause but 'because it is softer' explains reason more naturally. This fixes verb choice and clarity.

× It was around 20 years ago when I first LA started to use the keyboard computer and in the beginning I use it just few fingers to type to use the keyboard, but later it's improved.

✓ It was around 20 years ago when I first started to use a computer keyboard, and in the beginning I used just a few fingers to type, but later my skill improved.

Multiple tense and article errors: 'first LA started' appears to have extra letters; use 'first started'. Use 'a computer keyboard' (article and word order). 'In the beginning I use' should be past 'I used' to match 'It was ... ago'. 'Just few fingers' needs 'a few fingers'. 'It's improved' should be 'my skill improved' or 'it improved' in past tense. These corrections fix past tense consistency, articles, and word order.

× I type a lot and especially when I was a student I used to type my thesis and reports on the computer and gradually it improves and I became a fast faster on typing.

✓ I type a lot. Especially when I was a student, I used to type my thesis and reports on the computer, and gradually my typing improved and I became faster.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence mixes present and past incorrectly. Break into clearer clauses. 'Gradually it improves' should be past 'gradually my typing improved' to match 'when I was a student'. 'I became a fast faster on typing' is ungrammatical; use 'I became faster' or 'my typing became faster'. Also add commas and adjust word order for clarity.