Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: give a clear topic sentence, then two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "due to some reason" and repetition. Use varied vocabulary (e.g. "accessible" instead of "reach out"). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's more convenient and reliable. For example, digital notes are accessible from any device and are easy to search, which saves time. Also, typing reduces the need for physical paper, so I can keep everything organized without worrying about losing notes.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use linking words to add a brief reason and one specific supporting detail. Reduce filler words (uh, and) and correct basic grammar ("I am used to typing"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use my laptop for both work and personal tasks. It's convenient and portable, so I can type comfortably whether I'm at home or traveling. I'm used to this setup, so it feels natural for most of my daily work.

제안: Organize the story more clearly: state when, where, and how briefly. Use past tense consistently and avoid unnecessary repetition. Add one linking phrase (e.g. "As a result") to show outcome. Keep it to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I learned to type when I was a child at a computer course. After a class typing competition, I started using typing games on my laptop to practice. As a result, I improved quickly because the games made learning fun and interactive.

제안: Answer directly with a present-tense habit and give two specific improvement methods, using linking words. Remove hesitations and correct small mistakes ("improve my typing" not "topic"). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: I improve my typing mainly by doing regular coursework and assignments on my laptop, which gives me constant practice. I also use typing games to build speed and accuracy because they make practice enjoyable and help me focus on accuracy.

× I prefer typing rather than handwriting due to some reason.

✓ I prefer typing rather than handwriting for several reasons.

The phrase 'due to some reason' is unnatural and uses no article correctly; 'for several reasons' is a natural collocation. This fixes article/word-choice and makes the sentence idiomatic. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× First, the typing is very common in today's world that such technology and also modern world.

✓ First, typing is very common in today's technological world.

The use of 'the typing' and the clause 'that such technology and also modern world' is ungrammatical and has article misuse and redundancy. Remove the definite article before 'typing' and compress the idea to 'today's technological world' for clarity and correctness. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× So it helps you to reach out your notes whenever you want.

✓ So it helps you access your notes whenever you want.

The verb phrase 'reach out your notes' is incorrect. Use 'access your notes' or 'reach your notes' (but 'access' is best). Also 'it helps you to' -> 'it helps you' is more natural though both are possible. This corrects verb choice and pronoun use. (Grammar problem type ID:12)

× But if you use handwriting, you need paper that will be very difficult to find.

✓ But if you use handwriting, you need paper, which can be difficult to find.

Use of 'that' and tense/modal phrasing is awkward. Replace with a non-restrictive clause 'which can be difficult to find' and include a comma. This corrects article/relative clause usage and makes the sentence natural. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have my laptop on home and also at home and my work and I always do every task on my laptop keyboard.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I have my laptop at home and at work, and I do almost every task on it.

Use 'at home' not 'on home'. The original repeats phrases and uses awkward structure. Replace repetition with 'at home and at work' and use pronoun 'it' to avoid redundancy. This fixes incorrect preposition and improves sentence economy. (Grammar problem type ID:11)

× It's and it's so convenient to type and I'm really used to do it in my own laptop and uh, it is very good for me to type on a laptop keyboard.

✓ It's very convenient to type, and I'm really used to doing it on my laptop; typing on a laptop keyboard suits me well.

Incorrect pronoun usage and verb form: 'used to do' should be 'used to doing'. 'In my own laptop' is incorrect; use 'on my laptop'. Also remove redundant 'it's and it's'. This corrects pronoun and gerund use. (Grammar problem type ID:12)

× When I was a child, I was going to computer course.

✓ When I was a child, I attended a computer course.

Use simple past 'attended' rather than progressive 'was going to' for a completed action. Also include an article: 'a computer course'. This fixes tense and article errors. (Grammar problem type ID:5)

× We had a competition there and after we finished our Windows program, the teacher said you should start your typing competition.

✓ We had a competition there, and after we finished the Windows program, the teacher said we should start the typing competition.

Direct speech/title issues and pronoun reference: 'you should' should be reported as 'we should' since the speaker describes what the teacher told the class. Also 'our Windows program' -> 'the Windows program' is more natural. This fixes pronoun and article usage. (Grammar problem type ID:12)

× So I downloaded a typing games on my laptop.

✓ So I downloaded a typing game on my laptop.

Number agreement and noun form: 'a typing games' mixes singular article with plural noun. Use 'a typing game' or 'typing games' without 'a'. This corrects singular/plural mismatch and article use. (Grammar problem type ID:1)

× So by the time I started playing games, I learned how to type on a computer and it was so interesting and easy for me.

✓ By the time I started playing the games, I had learned how to type on a computer, and it was very interesting and easy for me.

Sequence of past events calls for past perfect 'had learned' before 'started' or reorder clauses. Original uses simple past for both actions which can be ambiguous. Use 'had learned' to show completion before another past action and change 'so' to 'very' for formality. (Grammar problem type ID:6)

× When I was at university, I always do my, uh, I always did my task on my laptop, so I improved my typing with the, doing my assignments.

✓ When I was at university, I always did my tasks on my laptop, so I improved my typing by doing my assignments.

Tense consistency: 'always do' should be past 'always did' to match 'When I was at university'. Remove unnecessary commas and use 'by doing' to indicate method. This fixes tense and sentence structure. (Grammar problem type ID:6)

× But uh, most of the time I really like to play games, typing games, so that will help me to improve my topic, my typing and, umm, it would refresh my mind.

✓ But most of the time I really liked to play typing games, which helped me improve my typing and refreshed my mind.

Tense consistency requires past tense 'liked' and 'helped' because speaker refers to past university period. 'Improve my topic' is wrong; should be 'improve my typing'. Also replace modal 'would' with simple past 'refreshed'. This corrects pronoun reference, verb choice, and tense. (Grammar problem type ID:12)