Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and clear: state preference in one direct sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers (umm, uh) and repetition. Also correct awkward phrases (e.g., “males in hand” is unclear).

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because most of my work and communication are digital. For example, I write emails and take notes on my laptop, which is faster and easier to edit than writing by hand.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and use a linking phrase for specifics. Remove fillers and correct minor grammar: say “to send emails and chat with my friends.” Add one brief detail about frequency or purpose to enrich the answer.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I use it mainly to send emails and chat with my friends, and I also type documents for my studies several times a week.

제안: Answer directly with a clear time statement, then give a concise reason or brief context. Omit fillers and simplify: “my dad bought me a laptop, so I learned to type.”

예시: I learned to type when I was 12 years old. My dad bought me a laptop at that time, so I had to learn typing to do homework and use the computer.

제안: Give a direct method sentence and then one or two specific examples with linking words. Avoid vague words (“scientists”) and filler. Explain briefly how the websites help (e.g., timed tests, drills).

예시: I improve my typing by practicing on online platforms. For example, I use Monkeytype, which offers timed tests and practice drills to increase speed and accuracy.

× I usually prefer typing because no one writes umm, males in hand.

✓ I usually prefer typing because no one writes manually anymore.

The student used 'males in hand' which is incorrect word choice and word order. The intended meaning is writing by hand; use the adverb 'manually' or the phrase 'by hand' to describe the manner. Also 'no one' requires a clear modifier 'anymore' to indicate a change over time. Suggestion: replace incorrect phrase with 'manually' or 'by hand' and add 'anymore' for clarity.

× It's all in, umm, virtual.

✓ Everything is virtual now.

The original sentence has awkward word order and filler words. Use a complete subject and predicate: 'Everything is virtual now.' This is clearer and fits conversational tense.

× To be honest, I prefer type typewriting rather than handwriting because.

✓ To be honest, I prefer typing rather than handwriting.

'Type typewriting' is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use the gerund 'typing' to contrast with 'handwriting.' Also the sentence ended abruptly with 'because' and no clause; remove 'because' or complete the comparison. Suggestion: use 'typing rather than handwriting.'

× Uh, I have my laptop so I use my laptop keyboard every day to e-mail to send messages and the chat back with my friends.

✓ I have a laptop, so I use its keyboard every day to send emails and chat with my friends.

Problems: article repetition 'my laptop' twice is wordy; use 'a laptop' or 'my laptop' once and 'its' for the keyboard. 'to e-mail to send messages' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'to send emails' and 'chat with' (not 'the chat back'). Also 'email' pluralized and 'chat with' is the correct collocation.

× When I was umm, 12 years old, my dad got me umm, it's a laptop so I had to learn how to type otherwise I couldn't be using it.

✓ When I was 12 years old, my dad got me a laptop, so I had to learn how to type; otherwise I couldn't use it.

Tense and modal misuse: 'it's a laptop' interrupts past narrative; use 'a laptop' to maintain past context. 'I couldn't be using it' is unnatural; correct is 'I couldn't use it.' Also remove filler words and join clauses correctly with 'so' and 'otherwise.'

× Actually umm, scientists, there are plenty of ways to improve your typing, but what I find umm easier and comfortable is umm, there is a lot of websites.

✓ Actually, there are plenty of ways to improve your typing, but what I find easier and more comfortable is that there are a lot of websites.

Several issues: 'scientists' is irrelevant and likely a slip; remove it. 'what I find umm easier and comfortable' needs parallel adjectives: 'easier and more comfortable.' 'there is a lot of websites' has incorrect agreement: use 'there are a lot of websites' or 'a lot of websiteS' with plural verb. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel adjective forms.

× 1 of it is monkey type.

✓ One of them is Monkeytype.

Pronoun and number agreement: '1 of it' is incorrect. Use 'One of them' to refer to 'websites.' Also capitalize the website name and use the correct form 'Monkeytype.'

× You just enter and uh, the structure is smooth and made.

✓ You just enter, and the interface is smooth and well-designed.

The original sentence is unclear: 'enter' needs an object (enter the site), and 'the structure is smooth and made' is ungrammatical. Use 'the interface is smooth and well-designed' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: add the object and use appropriate adjectives.