Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct small grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid filler sounds like "uh" and check verb forms (e.g., "when I need to memorize something" -> "when I need to memorize").

예시: I prefer both, depending on the situation. For memorizing or studying, I usually handwrite notes because writing by hand helps me remember better. However, for everyday communication like texting or emailing, I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient.

제안: Make the answer a single coherent statement and avoid repeating the same idea. Use a linking reason phrase and a concise explanation of convenience. Combine short fragments into one or two polished sentences.

예시: I type on a laptop every day because I don't have a desktop and a laptop is more convenient for me. Since I often work or study outside my home, the laptop's portability makes it easy to carry and use on the go.

제안: Organize chronologically and avoid hesitations. Start with a clear time reference, then give concise supporting details. Fix collocations ("on a daily basis") and phrasing ("learning typing" -> "learning to type").

예시: I began learning to type when I was very young because we had a desktop at home and my mother used the computer every day. I watched her often, and as soon as I could read, I started practicing typing myself.

제안: Use present tense for ongoing habits and give one or two specific methods. Replace vague phrases with concrete activities and correct grammar ("my hand also getting used" -> "my hands got used" or "my hands became accustomed").

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day on my laptop, often by writing emails, essays, or short notes. Regular practice helped me memorize the keyboard layout and my fingers became accustomed to the key positions, which increased my speed and accuracy.

× I like both actually.

✓ I like both, actually.

This sentence needs a comma before the adverb actually to mark a slight pause and improve clarity. The present simple tense is correct for a general preference.

× It depends on the situation and when I need to memorize something, uh or remember it.

✓ It depends on the situation and on whether I need to memorize something or remember it.

Use 'depends on' with the preposition repeated or use 'on whether' to introduce alternatives. Remove fillers ('uh') in written form. This keeps the present simple tense and improves sentence structure.

× For a long time I prefer handwriting, but in daily life when I text my friends or sending emails, I prefer typing.

✓ For a long time I have preferred handwriting, but in daily life, when I text my friends or send emails, I prefer typing.

The first clause refers to a period up to now, so present perfect ('have preferred') is more appropriate than simple present. The second clause mixes verb forms: use parallel verbs 'text' and 'send' in present simple. Add a comma after 'daily life' for clarity.

× I type on a laptop because I don't have a desktop and laptop is more convenient because it's more usable when I carry it outside.

✓ I type on a laptop because I don't have a desktop, and a laptop is more convenient because it's easier to carry outside.

Add the article 'a' before 'laptop' (article error/third person context). 'More usable when I carry it outside' is awkward; 'easier to carry outside' is natural. Use a comma before 'and' joining independent clauses.

× Comfortable for carrying outside.

✓ It is comfortable to carry outside.

Original is a sentence fragment without a verb. Add 'It is' and use the infinitive 'to carry' to form a complete sentence.

× I remember having a computer and desktop in our house since I was a child and my mom used to uh, use computer in daily basis.

✓ I remember having a computer and a desktop in our house since I was a child, and my mom used to use the computer on a daily basis.

Add article 'a' before 'desktop' and 'the' before 'computer'. Remove filler 'uh'. Use the phrase 'on a daily basis' (correct preposition). The past habitual 'used to use' is correct; punctuation improves clarity.

× I always watched her typing.

✓ I always watched her type.

After verbs like 'watch', use the bare infinitive ('type') when describing the whole action as observed. 'Typing' (present participle) is also possible but 'watch her type' is more natural for completed observed actions.

× So as soon as I learned reading, I started, uh, learning typing.

✓ So as soon as I learned to read, I started learning to type.

Use infinitive forms: 'learned to read' and 'learned to type'. Remove filler 'uh'. This follows correct verb patterns and maintains past tense context.

× I improved my typing by typing on a desktop or laptop on a daily basis, whatever the topic is.

✓ I improved my typing by practicing on a desktop or laptop on a daily basis, no matter the topic.

'Typing on a desktop or laptop' is repetitive; 'practicing' is more precise. 'Whatever the topic is' is colloquial; 'no matter the topic' is clearer. Maintain past tense 'improved' for completed action.

× It really helped me to memorize where the alphabets are and that way my hand also getting used to it.

✓ It really helped me memorize where the letters are, and that way my hands also got used to it.

Use 'memorize' without 'to' after 'helped' (both forms are acceptable but 'helped me memorize' is natural). 'Alphabets' is incorrect; use 'letters'. The phrase 'my hand also getting used to it' is ungrammatical: use past 'my hands also got used to it' to match 'helped' and reflect habitual adaptation. Use plural 'hands' for general reference.