Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more structured and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "also"). Avoid filler words and repetitions, and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I type I can quickly delete or move text, which saves time. I also enjoy the tactile feedback of a high-quality keyboard, which makes long writing sessions more comfortable.

제안: Be direct and avoid hesitation. Give one clear sentence stating the device, then add a brief reason. Remove redundant phrases and contradictions (the line about never having a computer is confusing when you say you use a laptop).

예시: I type on my laptop every day because I use it for work. I rely on the laptop for emails, reports, and online meetings, so I use the keyboard for several hours daily.

제안: Give a clear timeline and combine related points into one coherent answer. Use linking words such as "first" and "later" and be specific about ages or school level if possible. Avoid hesitation sounds.

예시: I first learned to type during primary school IT lessons when I was about 10 years old. Later, when I bought my first laptop as a teenager, I practised more and became faster and more accurate.

제안: Provide a structured strategy with specific techniques and examples. Start with a topic sentence about your main method, then give 1–2 concrete practices (e.g., timed exercises, online lessons) and mention results or goals. Avoid filler words.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and setting measurable goals. For example, I do 15 minutes of online touch-typing exercises every day and use typing tests to track my speed and accuracy; this helped me increase my words-per-minute over a few months.

× I definitely prefer typing 'cause I like the feeling the keyboard gives me and especially when it's a high quality keyboard.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because I like the feeling the keyboard gives me, especially when it is a high-quality keyboard.

The original uses the informal contraction 'cause' which is acceptable in speech but not ideal for grammar correction; also the clause 'and especially when' creates a fragment and awkward connection. Replace 'and especially when' with a comma and 'especially when it is' to make a complete clause. 'High quality' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun ('high-quality keyboard'). Use 'it is' instead of a fragment for clarity.

× And As for handwriting, it's not always possible to correct your writing clearly.

✓ As for handwriting, it is not always possible to correct your writing clearly.

Beginning with 'And As' is redundant and capitalizes 'As' incorrectly mid-sentence. Remove the leading 'And' and use 'it is' instead of contraction for formality. The sentence then reads as a complete, grammatically correct statement.

× Yeah, uh, I type on my laptop every day, Yeah, I do it on a regular basis 'cause I need it for my work, and As for the computer, I've never had one, so yeah.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day; I do it regularly because I need it for my work. I have never had a desktop computer, so I do not use one.

The original mixes informal fillers ('uh', 'yeah') and repeats 'yeah' unnecessarily. 'As for the computer, I've never had one' is ambiguous: the speaker likely means a desktop computer, not 'computer' in general because they own a laptop. Clarify by specifying 'desktop computer.' Replace contractions and filler for clarity and use proper sentence connectors. Use semicolon or separate sentences to avoid run-on sentence.

× Well, just like any other kid, we had IT lessons at school.

✓ Well, just like any other kid, I had IT lessons at school.

The original mixes first-person singular 'I' with plural 'we', creating a mismatch in perspective. Use 'I had' to match the singular narrator. 'Had' is correct past tense for attending lessons in the past.

× So that was, uh, my first experience in terms of typing.

✓ That was my first experience of typing.

The phrase 'in terms of' is wordy and unnecessary here. Remove filler 'uh' and simplify to 'experience of typing' for natural, concise English.

× And uh, then I bought my first laptop and that was my second experience.

✓ Then I bought my first laptop, which was my second experience.

Remove filler 'uh' and combine clauses more naturally. Use 'which was' to link the purchase to being the second experience. The past tense 'bought' is correct; adjust sentence structure for fluency.

× Well, my approach is that you have to do it regularly and that's how you can improve your typing.

✓ My approach is that you have to practice regularly, and that is how you can improve your typing.

Replace vague 'do it' with 'practice' for clarity and formality. Use 'that is' instead of contraction for consistency. The present tense is appropriate here; adjust vocabulary for precision.

× And also, umm, you can type without looking at the keyboard, uh.

✓ You can also type without looking at the keyboard.

Remove filler 'umm' and trailing 'uh'. Move 'also' to follow subject for natural word order. The verb phrase 'type without looking' is correct; only reordering and removing fillers improves grammar and clarity.