Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện 1) Tránh lỗi phát âm và từ sai (ví dụ: 'tie' → 'type'). 2) Giảm tiếng ngắt quãng như 'umm' và lời nói lặp lại để tự nhiên hơn. 3) Cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể. 4) Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như 'synchronize', 'transfer' thay cho 'transform'.

예시: I prefer typing on electronic devices because it is more convenient and efficient. For example, I can easily synchronize and transfer files between my phone and laptop, which saves time and makes my work smoother.

제안: Cải thiện 1) Sử dụng câu ngắn, chính xác: tránh cấu trúc lộn xộn ('take everything that need for my work' không rõ nghĩa). 2) Tránh 'umm' và lặp từ. 3) Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do (ví dụ: kích thước phím, độ bền, thoải mái). 4) Dùng từ vựng chính xác như 'prefer', 'comfortable', 'ergonomic'.

예시: I type on a desktop keyboard at work because it is more comfortable and durable. The keys are larger and more responsive, which helps me type faster and reduces strain during long work sessions.

제안: Cải thiện 1) Giữ tự nhiên nhưng tránh phóng đại: 'became a master' nghe quá mức; dùng 'became proficient' hoặc 'got quite good'. 2) Loại bỏ 'umm' và liên kết logic với từ nối như 'since' hoặc 'after that'. 3) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: phương pháp học, luyện gõ bằng mười ngón).

예시: I learned to type when I was about seven after my family bought a new desktop and my father taught me. Since then I practiced regularly and became quite proficient, mainly using the touch-typing method.

제안: Cải thiện 1) Trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng: nêu có hay không có kế hoạch, rồi giải thích. 2) Tránh lặp và 'umm'. 3) Nếu không có kế hoạch, đề xuất một bước đơn giản (ví dụ: luyện tập 10 phút/ngày với trang web luyện gõ). 4) Dùng từ vựng chính xác như 'practice', 'online typing course', 'accuracy' và 'speed'.

예시: I don't have a formal plan, but I try to improve by practicing a little each day. For example, I spend about ten minutes on online typing exercises to focus on accuracy and gradually increase my speed.

× I would like to tie everything on my electronic devices because I found it quite convenient to, umm, transform data between my smart devices to work more efficiently.

✓ I would like to type everything on my electronic devices because I find it quite convenient to transfer data between my smart devices to work more efficiently.

The student used 'tie' instead of 'type' (vocabulary error, not in list) and mixed past 'found' with present habit—use present simple 'find' for general preferences. Also 'transform' is odd; 'transfer' fits data. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual preferences and correct vocabulary: 'type' and 'transfer'. Relevant grammar types: 22 (article errors) applied as closest—actually errors are verb choice and tense.

× At work I always use my desktop to take everything that need for my work. Umm and I find that the keyboard of the desktop is more useful for me.

✓ At work I always use my desktop to take everything that I need for my work. I find that the desktop's keyboard is more useful for me.

Missing subject 'I' before 'need' caused a clause error and verb 'need' requires subject 'I'. Also 'keyboard of the desktop' is awkward; use possessive 'desktop's keyboard'. Suggestion: include explicit subject in relative clauses and use natural possessive forms.

× When I was umm 7, my family bought a new desktop and at this time my father taught me how to type on a keyboard. After that I became a master on texting keyboard.

✓ When I was 7, my family bought a new desktop and my father taught me how to type on a keyboard. After that I became very good at typing on the keyboard.

'At this time' is unnecessary; sequence of past events is clear with past simple. 'Master on texting keyboard' is ungrammatical: use 'very good at typing' or 'a master at typing'. Suggestion: simplify and use correct preposition 'at' with 'good/master' and use 'typing' not 'texting' if meaning keyboard skill.

× I don't think that I have any clear plan to improve my typing because I always have to speed up my umm, speed up my typing to umm, finish everything that I need to to do on this.

✓ I don't think that I have any clear plan to improve my typing because I always have to speed up my typing to finish everything that I need to do.

Duplicate words and filler 'umm' should be removed. 'Need to to do' has double 'to'. Use infinitive 'to finish' and 'need to do'—present simple 'have to' expresses habitual necessity. Suggestion: eliminate fillers, avoid repetition, and fix infinitive structure.