Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (verb forms, articles, plural/singular), reduce repetition, and make answers more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases like “all my writings, all my poetry, poetries.”

예시: I prefer typing because it is more practical and much faster than handwriting. For example, I can edit documents quickly and store them on the cloud, which makes sharing easier. However, when I was a teenager I used to write poems by hand, which felt more personal.

제안: Correct pronunciation and careless typos (e.g., 'top on the boat') and avoid repetition. Use a clear topic sentence naming both devices, then give a brief comparison with specific reasons and one linking word (e.g., 'while', 'however').

예시: I use both a laptop and a desktop every day. At home I mainly use a laptop because it's portable, while at work I use a desktop because the larger screen makes it easier to review patient records.

제안: Fix grammar and phrasing (e.g., 'when I was 16' not 'in my 16th'), avoid awkward constructions and repetition. Provide a concise timeline and one specific detail about why it was memorable, using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I learned to type when I was 16 after my parents bought me my first computer. Because I started typing my homework and poems, it was exciting to see my writing appear on the screen and to be able to save and edit it easily.

제안: Good content and relevance. Improve sentence variety and correct minor grammar (e.g., 'I sometimes use online typing tools'). Be specific about which tools or practices and link points logically (e.g., 'because', 'therefore').

예시: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice and by using online typing tutors such as TypingClub. Also, as a doctor I write daily progress notes, so I focus on accuracy and speed because patient records must be clear and correct.

× Nowadays I prefer typing as it more practical and making things faster and easier.

✓ Nowadays I prefer typing as it is more practical and makes things faster and easier.

Missing auxiliary verb 'is' for the adjective phrase and wrong verb form 'making' should be 'makes' to agree with subject 'it'. Use present simple: 'it is more practical and makes things faster and easier.' Suggestion: include 'is' and use third-person singular verb form 'makes' for clarity.

× Before, when I was teenager, I was writing all the time and we didn't have computer, so it was difficult to make typing.

✓ Before, when I was a teenager, I wrote all the time and we didn't have computers, so typing was difficult.

Missing article 'a' before 'teenager' and unnatural progressive 'was writing' when describing habitual past; use simple past 'wrote'. 'Computer' should be plural 'computers' to match general meaning. 'Make typing' is incorrect collocation; use 'typing was difficult.' Suggestion: add 'a', use simple past for habits, pluralize 'computers', and rephrase to 'typing was difficult.'

× All my writings, all my poetry, poetries, I was writing by handwriting.

✓ All my writings and my poetry I wrote by hand.

Redundant and incorrect plural 'poetries' (poetry is uncountable). Use simple past 'wrote' for past habit and idiomatic 'by hand' not 'by handwriting.' Suggestion: use 'poetry' not 'poetries', use 'wrote' and 'by hand.'

× So nowadays everything changed.

✓ So nowadays everything has changed.

Contradiction between 'nowadays' (present) and simple past 'changed'. Use present perfect 'has changed' to link past change to present state. Suggestion: use present perfect when indicating a change that affects the present.

× I top on the boat as at home I have laptop and I'm typing on the laptop keyboard.

✓ I type on the laptop at home because I have a laptop and I'm typing on its keyboard.

'Top' is a typo for 'type'. 'on the boat' is incorrect context; likely meant 'laptop' or 'at home'. Use 'type on the laptop' and 'because' for reason. Clarify possessive 'its keyboard.' Suggestion: correct typos and use clear word order: 'I type on my laptop at home.'

× At work I'm using computer so I'm using desktop.

✓ At work I use a computer, so I use a desktop.

Missing article 'a' before 'computer' and unnecessary progressive 'I'm using' for habitual action; use simple present 'I use'. Suggestion: add 'a' and use simple present for routines.

× Both of them are comfortable and convenient to use, but desktop are more desktops are more wide and big so it's easy to see and more comfortable.

✓ Both of them are comfortable and convenient to use, but desktops are wider and bigger, so they're easier to see and more comfortable.

Subject 'desktop' should be plural 'desktops' to match 'both of them'. Use comparative forms 'wider' and 'bigger' (not 'more wide'), and use plural verb 'are' and pronoun 'they're'. Also remove repeated phrase. Suggestion: use plural nouns for plural subject, correct comparative adjectives, and avoid repetition.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in my 16th.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was 16.

Incorrect ordinal expression 'in my 16th.' Use 'when I was 16' or 'when I was 16 years old.' Suggestion: use cardinal age expressions without 'in' or ordinal.

× My parents bought me computers, so first experience with my typing started.

✓ My parents bought me a computer, so my first experience with typing began.

Singular/plural mismatch: 'computers' vs 'me' suggests one computer; 'first experience with my typing started' is awkward. Use 'a computer' and 'my first experience with typing began.' Suggestion: simplify to 'a computer' and use 'began' for events starting.

× That time I was typing my homework and poetry and it was good experience as first time I start to see my poetries on the screen.

✓ At that time I typed my homework and poetry, and it was a good experience because it was the first time I saw my poetry on the screen.

Use simple past 'typed' for completed actions, add 'a' before 'good experience', 'because' for reason. 'first time I start to see' should be past 'it was the first time I saw'. 'poetries' incorrect; use 'poetry.' Suggestion: use simple past consistently and correct uncountable noun and tense sequence.

× By daily practice I improve my typing.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing daily.

Adverbial phrase order is more natural after verb; use gerund 'practicing' for continuous action. 'By daily practice' is awkward. Suggestion: use 'by practicing daily' or 'with daily practice'.

× I am sometimes using typing tools in Internet as well.

✓ I sometimes use typing tools on the Internet as well.

Use 'on the Internet' not 'in Internet'. Use simple present 'I sometimes use' for habitual action and correct word order. Suggestion: use 'on the Internet' and simple present for habits.

× I'm working as a doctor so for my patients daily I'm writing progress notes and I need to be faster and more correct because it is about patients information and details.

✓ I work as a doctor, so for my patients I write daily progress notes and need to be faster and more accurate because it is about patients' information and details.

Use simple present 'I work' for profession. Word order: 'write daily progress notes' is natural. 'More correct' should be 'more accurate.' Possessive apostrophe needed: 'patients' information.' Suggestion: use 'work' for job, 'accurate' instead of 'correct', and add possessive.

× So this helps me a lot.

✓ This helps me a lot.

Redundant 'So' at start is unnecessary but not strictly wrong; removing it makes sentence more direct. Maintain present tense 'helps.' Suggestion: use concise phrasing: 'This helps me a lot.'