Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は明確で適切ですが、表現がやや単調で冗長です。トピック文の後に具体例や比較を1〜2文で追加し、接続詞を自然に使って流れを良くしましょう。また、語彙の幅を広げるために同義語（e.g. "more convenient", "more flexible"）を使うと良いです。文法的には“rather than”の使い方は問題ないですが、短く簡潔にまとめるとより自然に聞こえます。

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more efficient. For example, I can quickly delete or rearrange sentences when I type, which saves time during study or work.

제안: 回答は意図は伝わりますが、文が途切れており語順や接続が不自然です。短い主文で直接答えた後、理由を一文で具体的に述べ、不要なフレーズを省きましょう。接続詞（because, since, so）を正しく使い、冠詞や句読点に注意してください。

예시: Yes, I do. I use a laptop keyboard every day because most of my college assignments and notes are on my computer.

제안: 意味は通じますが、助動詞や語順の誤り、冗長な表現があります。過去の時期を述べるために「learned」を使い、接続して一つの流れる文にまとめると自然です。具体的に学んだ年齢や状況（e.g. computer class, age）を付け加えると内容が豊かになります。

예시: I learned to type in elementary school when I took a computer class, so I started practicing formal typing skills around age nine.

제안: 時制の一致や重複表現の訂正が必要です。現在の習慣か過去の経験かを明確にし、時制を統一しましょう。改善方法を1〜2具体例で述べ、接続詞でつなげると論理的になります。余分な単語（e.g. extra "I"）は削除してください。

예시: I improved my typing skills at school by practicing regularly; for example, in junior high I often played online typing games to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I use laptop keyboard everyday because my college work is on the computer and for example the. I.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because my college work is on the computer.

The sentence has several problems: missing article before 'laptop keyboard' (use 'a'), 'everyday' is an adjective but should be the adverbial phrase 'every day', and the fragment 'and for example the. I.' is ungrammatical and should be removed. Improve by using correct articles, choosing 'every day' for frequency, and removing incomplete fragments.

× I must add the keyboard skills when I was in elementary school.

✓ I must have added keyboard skills when I was in elementary school.

The modal 'must' with a past time reference requires a perfect form (must have + past participle) to express a deduction about the past. The original mixes present modal with past time. Use 'must have added' or change to past tense 'I added'.

× Especially when I took course about computer typing.

✓ Especially when I took a course about computer typing.

The noun 'course' needs an article ('a course'). Also 'about computer typing' is acceptable but 'in computer typing' or 'on computer typing' can also be used; 'about' is okay but keep consistent. Add the article to make the noun phrase grammatical.

× I improve my I improved my typing skills while I'm in schools.

✓ I improved my typing skills while I was in school.

The sentence mixes present and past forms ('improve' and 'I improved' and 'I'm in schools'). Since the time reference is past, use past tense 'improved' and past continuous/was: 'while I was in school'. Also 'schools' should be singular 'school' in this context.

× For example, when I'm in junior high school student, I used to do play online typing games.

✓ For example, when I was a junior high school student, I used to play online typing games.

The clause mixes present 'I'm' with past 'used to'. Use past: 'when I was a junior high school student'. Also 'do play' is incorrect; use 'play'. Include the article 'a' before 'junior high school student'.