Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical, concise and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct common mistakes (e.g., "more convenient", "helps me remember"). Limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing on my phone when I'm on the move because it's faster and more convenient. However, for school notes I usually write by hand because handwriting helps me remember information better and makes it easier to organise ideas.

제안: Give a direct answer and complete the sentence. Use linking words and correct nouns/adjectives ("daily life" → "every day", "smaller"/"more portable"). Avoid sentence fragments. Provide one concrete reason.

예시: I type on a laptop every day because it's more portable than a desktop. Also, its smaller size makes it easy to carry between home and campus, so I can work wherever I need to.

제안: Use the correct tense and simplify the structure. Start with a clear time expression (e.g., "when I was a child"), then briefly describe how you learned, using linking words and correct verb forms. Remove fillers like "uh".

예시: I learned to type when I was a child because my parents taught me the basic letters and I practised on the family laptop. As a result, I can now type quickly and comfortably.

제안: Answer directly with a clear routine and specific methods. Use correct grammar ("every day", "homework that students need to complete", "improve speed and accuracy"). Use linking words to show cause and effect and avoid repetition.

예시: I improve my typing by practising every day, especially when I do homework that requires lots of typing. I also use online typing drills to increase my speed and accuracy, which helps me finish tasks more efficiently.

× Sometimes I prefer typing on my phone because it's faster and more convenience, especially when I'm on the go.

✓ Sometimes I prefer typing on my phone because it's faster and more convenient, especially when I'm on the go.

The adjective 'convenience' is incorrectly used where the comparative adjective 'convenient' is required to modify the subject. Use 'convenient' to describe something's quality. Also keep parallel structure: 'faster and more convenient.' Suggestion: use adjectives to modify nouns or link verbs (is/are).

× But for the school notes, I usually use handwriting.

✓ But for school notes, I usually handwrite.

'The school notes' uses an unnecessary definite article; 'handwriting' as a noun is awkward here. Use the verb 'handwrite' to indicate the action. Also omit 'the' for general reference. Suggestion: use the verb form for actions and omit articles for general plural nouns.

× I usually handwrite in a novel since, uh, writing is can help me remember information better.

✓ I usually take handwritten notes in a notebook, since writing helps me remember information better.

The original mixes incorrect verb forms ('is can') and uses 'novel' incorrectly. Replace with 'take handwritten notes in a notebook' and correct verb 'helps' to match singular subject 'writing.' Remove filler 'uh.' Suggestion: use clear noun phrases and correct subject-verb agreement.

× I usually bring my laptop on the daily life because laptop is more convenient to take.

✓ I usually bring my laptop in daily life because a laptop is more convenient to carry.

'On the daily life' is incorrect; use 'in daily life' or better 'in my daily life.' 'Laptop' needs an article 'a' and 'to take' is unnatural; use 'to carry.' Suggestion: include articles with singular countable nouns and use natural prepositions.

× And. It's small size, it's more easy to.

✓ Also, it's small, so it's easier to carry.

'It's small size' should be 'it's small' or 'its small size' (possessive). 'More easy' is incorrect; use comparative 'easier.' The sentence fragment 'to' is incomplete; specify the verb 'to carry.' Suggestion: use correct comparative forms and complete clauses.

× I have know how to type the keyboard since I was a child and my parent told me the uh essential letters and I practice on a laptop so uh now I can type quickly and comfortably be comfortable.

✓ I have known how to type on the keyboard since I was a child; my parents taught me the essential keys and I practiced on a laptop, so now I can type quickly and comfortably.

Multiple errors: 'have know' should be present perfect 'have known.' Use 'type on the keyboard' not 'type the keyboard.' 'Parent' should be plural 'parents' and 'told me the essential letters' is better as 'taught me the essential keys.' Verb tense consistency: 'practiced' (past) fits with 'since I was a child.' Remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'be comfortable.' Suggestion: maintain tense consistency and correct verb forms.

× I practice typing on everyday because uh school have the homework need to student need to complete, so we need to learning practice more quickly umm which can help us to complete the task efficiency.

✓ I practice typing every day because at school we have homework that students need to complete, so we need to practice more to become faster, which helps us complete tasks more efficiently.

Several preposition and word choice errors: 'on everyday' should be 'every day.' 'School have' needs subject-verb agreement and 'at school we have' is correct. 'Need to student need to complete' is ungrammatical; use 'that students need to complete.' 'Learning practice' is redundant; use 'practice.' 'Complete the task efficiency' should be 'complete tasks more efficiently.' Suggestion: simplify clauses, use correct prepositions and adverbial forms ('every day' vs 'everyday'), and ensure subject-verb agreement.