Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Migliora chiarezza e grammatica: usa frasi più corte e corrette, includi un topic sentence diretto, poi 1–2 dettagli specifici collegati con connettivi (per esempio "because" o "so"). Evita ripetizioni e frasi interrotte. Ad esempio correggi tempi verbali e accordi ("I much rather" → "I much prefer"; "writing give" → "writing gives").

예시: I much prefer handwriting to typing because writing helps me understand and remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas more clearly, which makes revision easier. So I usually choose handwriting for studying and planning.

제안: Rendi la risposta più diretta e coerente: comincia con una frase tematica chiara (es. "Yes, I use a laptop daily") e supportala con dettagli specifici e numerici. Evita ripetizioni e inserisci un connettivo per collegare le idee ("therefore", "because").

예시: Yes. I use my laptop every day because I work as a lawyer and prepare many documents for clients. I usually work on it about six or seven hours a day, so typing is an essential part of my job.

제안: Correggi lessico e strutture temporali: usa espressioni chiare per indicare l'età e la sequenza ("when I was seven"; "since then"). Evita parole inappropriate o confuse ("more elastic"). Fornisci una breve spiegazione su come hai imparato o praticato la digitazione e collega con connettivi come "since" o "after".

예시: I learned to type when I was about seven, using my father's desktop computer. Since then I have used computers regularly for writing documents and doing research, which helped me improve my typing skills.

제안: Sii più specifico sui metodi di miglioramento: descrivi attività concrete (es. esercizi di dattilografia, applicazioni, pratica regolare) e usa connettivi per chiarezza. Evita frasi confuse e ripetizioni; correggi grammatica e collocazioni ("the amount of typing is increasing").

예시: I don't practice formal typing courses because I already type fairly fast, but I try to improve by doing short daily typing exercises and using online lessons when I have time. Also, because AI tools have increased my workload, I now type more each day, which naturally improves my speed and accuracy.

× I much rather prefer to write instead of typing.

✓ I much prefer writing to typing.

Use 'much prefer' or 'would much rather'; 'prefer to write instead of typing' mixes forms. Also use gerund 'writing' after prefer when contrasting with another activity. Suggestion: say 'I much prefer writing to typing.'

× This is because of writing give us a better experience in terms of understanding, having the control of what you're writing up and also memorizing what you are actually practical.

✓ This is because writing gives us a better experience in terms of understanding, having control over what you write, and memorizing what you have actually practiced.

Subject-verb agreement: 'writing' (singular noun/gerund) requires 'gives' (3rd person singular). Incorrect pronouns and word forms: 'having the control of' -> 'having control over'; 'what you're writing up' -> 'what you write'; 'memorizing what you are actually practical' is incorrect form and likely intended 'what you have actually practiced'. Suggest clearer phrasing and correct verb forms.

× So it's it's usually what I used to do when I when I.

✓ So it's what I usually used to do.

Redundant words and incomplete clause. Remove repetition and finish the sentence. 'Used to' indicates habitual past; keep order 'what I usually used to do.'

× Yeah, I work as a I'm a lawyer, therefore I work I have several documents to deliver to clients and also I, I usually have several experience with them.

✓ Yeah, I'm a lawyer; I have several documents to deliver to clients and I usually have a lot of experience working with them.

Remove redundant 'work as a I'm a lawyer' to 'I'm a lawyer'. 'Several experience' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot of experience' or 'several experiences' depending on meaning. Clean up repetitions.

× Therefore I use my personal computer quite often, I would say 6 or 7 hours during the day and.

✓ Therefore I use my personal computer quite often; I would say six or seven hours a day.

Run-on sentence and trailing 'and'. Replace comma with semicolon or period, write numbers in words for speech, and use 'a day' for frequency.

× Let's say from day one, actually, since I I started using my the desktop PC of my on my father when I was more elastic or seven.

✓ Let's say from day one; actually, I started using my father's desktop PC when I was around six or seven.

Preposition and possessive errors: use 'my father's desktop PC' not 'desktop PC of my on my father'. 'Around six or seven' expresses approximate age. 'More elastic' is incorrect word choice; replace with 'around'.

× And from there on I always used the the computer for writing up all the documents needed research and it was let's.

✓ From then on I always used the computer for writing all the necessary documents and for research.

Duplicate 'the the' remove repetition; 'writing up' can be 'writing'; reorder 'needed research' to 'necessary documents and for research'. Complete the sentence; avoid trailing fragments.

× I'm not sure if I need to.

✓ I'm not sure if I need to improve it.

Incomplete idea: 'need to' requires an object or verb. Add 'improve it' to clarify intention.

× I need to basically because I'm quite fast and it's my capacity of typing and use my PC for writing is more or less what I need for for the job that I do.

✓ I basically don't need to because I'm quite fast, and my typing ability and use of the PC for writing are more or less what I need for my job.

Awkward word order and incorrect noun phrases. 'Capacity of typing' -> 'typing ability'. Subject-verb agreement: compound subject requires plural verb 'are'. Remove duplicate 'for'. Clarify negation 'don't need to' to match context.

× And now so with the artificial intelligence, the amount of typing that I do every day is the increasing everyday more and more.

✓ And now, with artificial intelligence, the amount of typing I do every day is increasing more and more.

Article and adverb placement: remove 'the' before 'increasing'; use 'increasing' (present progressive) without 'is the'. Remove redundant 'everyday' when 'every day' or 'more and more' suffices. Use correct adverb placement: 'increasing more and more.'