Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve sentence accuracy and fluency: use consistent terms (typing vs typewriting), correct grammar (e.g., 'in different situations', 'easier for me to edit'), and avoid minor redundancy. Keep within 3–4 sentences: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting reasons with linking words.

예시: I prefer both handwriting and typing in different situations. For quick notes and documents I use typing because it lets me write fast and makes editing easy. However, I choose handwriting for personal letters or journals because it feels more expressive and helps me convey emotions.

제안: Clarify and correct grammar and word choice: be specific about ‘desktop’ vs ‘laptop’ and fix sentence fragments. Use linking words to contrast choices, and give a concise reason. Keep answers under five sentences.

예시: I use both a desktop keyboard and a laptop depending on the task. For casual reading or quick emails I often use a desktop because the full keyboard is comfortable. For writing longer, more formal documents I prefer my laptop because it is portable and more comfortable for long sessions.

제안: Improve coherence and accuracy: avoid irrelevant or vague details (e.g., 'when first Google was invented' is imprecise). Use precise phrasing and a clearer structure: state age, give a brief reason or memory, then a current situation. Use fewer sentences and correct small errors ('use keyboard' → 'use the keyboard').

예시: I learned to use the keyboard when I was about five or six years old. I learned mostly by playing computer games and exploring the early Internet, which helped me practise typing. Today I use the keyboard every day for work-related tasks.

제안: Be concise and specific about methods of improvement: mention concrete practices (daily practice, touch-typing courses, online typing tests) and use correct grammar ('faster and more accurately', avoid redundancy). Use linking words to explain cause and effect.

예시: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice at work, which forces me to type quickly and accurately. In addition, I use online typing tests and short touch-typing lessons to build speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer both handwriting and typewriting in different situation.

✓ I prefer both handwriting and typewriting in different situations.

The noun 'situation' should be plural 'situations' because 'both' and 'different' indicate multiple contexts. Use plural with countable nouns when referring to more than one instance. Suggestion: Use 'different situations' when talking about various contexts.

× Typewriting is more efficient because it helps me to write quickly and easier for me to edit my words.

✓ Typewriting is more efficient because it helps me to write quickly and makes it easier for me to edit my words.

Parallel structure requires matching forms: 'to write quickly' uses an adverb while 'easier' is an adjective. Use 'makes it easier' to create a correct clause. Suggestion: Keep parallel verb structures and use 'makes it easier' when describing that something facilitates an action.

× On the other hand, handwriting feels more personal and I can convey my emotions and be more expressive with.

✓ On the other hand, handwriting feels more personal and allows me to convey my emotions and be more expressive.

The sentence ends with a dangling preposition 'with' and has awkward structure. Removing 'with' and using 'allows me to' clarifies the subject and verb relationship. Suggestion: Avoid ending with unnecessary prepositions and ensure verbs have clear objects.

× I use both actual keyboards and laptop depend on the work for reading and.

✓ I use both external keyboards and a laptop depending on the work for reading and writing.

'Depend on' should be recast as 'depending on' to link the clause; 'actual keyboards' is unclear—'external' or 'desktop' is better; the sentence was incomplete, so add 'writing' to finish the thought. Suggestion: Use 'depending on' for conditional context and complete the parallel list (reading and writing).

× For creating more formal document I prefer using laptop because it is more comfortable to write in a long.

✓ For creating more formal documents I prefer using a laptop because it is more comfortable for writing at length.

'Document' should be plural 'documents' or preceded by an article; 'using laptop' needs the article 'a laptop'; 'write in a long' is ungrammatical—use 'writing at length' to express long writings. Suggestion: Use articles with singular nouns and correct idiomatic expressions like 'writing at length.'

× As far as I can remember, I learned to use keyboard as early as when I was 5 to 6 years old.

✓ As far as I can remember, I learned to use the keyboard as early as when I was 5 or 6 years old.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'keyboard'; use '5 or 6' rather than '5 to 6' in ages; past tense 'learned' is correct here but needs small adjustments. Suggestion: Use 'the keyboard' for a general device and '5 or 6 years old' for ages.

× I still remember when I was playing games and searching through the Internet when first Google was invented.

✓ I still remember playing games and searching the internet when Google was first launched.

Use 'playing games' without 'when'; 'searching the internet' is the common collocation; 'when first Google was invented' is awkward—use 'when Google was first launched' or 'launched' instead of 'invented.' Suggestion: Use natural collocations ('searching the internet') and correct verb for service start ('launched').

× Now I'm using keyboard mode to for work purposes.

✓ Now I'm using keyboard mode for work purposes.

Remove the extraneous word 'to' and consider adding 'the' before 'keyboard mode' if referring to a specific mode: 'using the keyboard mode.' Suggestion: Eliminate extra words and use articles if referring to a specific mode.

× My job requires me to type faster and accurate, so I think due to my daily working routine, it remarkably helped me to improve my typing and to type more faster.

✓ My job requires me to type faster and more accurately, so I think that my daily working routine has remarkably helped me improve my typing and to type faster.

'Accurate' should be the adverb 'accurately' to modify 'type'; use comparative 'more accurately' or 'faster and more accurately.' Tense mismatch: 'helped' with 'so I think' needs present perfect 'has helped' to link past routine to present ability. 'More faster' is redundant; use 'faster' alone. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helped me.' Suggestion: Use adverbs to modify verbs, ensure tense consistency (present perfect for past actions affecting present), and avoid redundant comparatives.