Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer handwriting.”), give one or two specific reasons, and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid repetition and unclear words like “earnest than earnest.” Use linking words (because, so, therefore) to connect ideas and provide a concrete example (e.g., taking notes by hand helps memory).

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand, I process and summarize ideas, so I can recall facts more easily during exams.

제안: Start with a direct answer (desktop or laptop), then give clear reasons with correct vocabulary. Avoid fillers and unclear phrases like “charge” or “different blacks.” Use linking words (because, so, for example) and quantify if possible (e.g., ‘faster’ or ‘more convenient’).

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is more convenient and faster than a phone for studying. For example, I write emails and reports each morning on my laptop, which saves time and makes editing easier.

제안: Give a single clear time reference, then briefly explain how you learned. Remove hesitations and confusing details. Use correct past tense and simple linking words (when, and, so). Provide a concise supporting detail such as where or who taught you.

예시: I started learning to type when I was about five, because my parents let me use their phone and computer. Later, in primary school, I learned proper typing techniques during computer classes where we practiced typing exercises.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence describing your methods, then give specific details (how often, what exercises, and measurable goals). Avoid unclear numbers and phrases; be precise about time and objectives. Use linking words (for example, so, therefore) and correct verbs (improve, track).

예시: I improve my typing by practicing touch-typing exercises and online typing games to increase both speed and accuracy. For example, I set aside 20–30 minutes every day and track my words-per-minute and error rate, focusing on common mistakes until they are corrected.

× I prefer handwriting to typing because handwriting is more earnest than earnest and more convenient.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because handwriting feels more personal and is more convenient.

The original uses 'earnest' incorrectly and repeats it; 'earnest' is inappropriate to describe handwriting. Use adjective 'personal' or 'natural' and include a linking verb 'feels' for clarity. Also include 'is' before 'more convenient' to form a complete clause. Suggestion: Replace wrong adjective with a better choice and ensure verbs are present before adjectives.

× Convenient and encouraging can help you memorize knowledge.

✓ Being convenient and engaging can help you remember information.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and uses 'encouraging' oddly; 'memorize knowledge' is nonnative collocation. Use gerund phrase 'Being convenient and engaging' as subject and 'remember information' as a natural collocation. Suggestion: Use gerund subject and choose native collocations like 'remember information'.

× Anything. Memorize anything easier.

✓ You can memorize things more easily.

Fragmented sentences 'Anything.' are incomplete. 'Memorize anything easier' lacks auxiliary and correct adverb placement. Use full sentence with modal 'can' and adverb 'more easily' after the verb. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments and place adverbs correctly ('more easily').

× I charge on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for study.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for studying.

The verb 'charge' is wrong; use 'type'. Preposition 'on' is correct with 'keyboard'. 'For study' is awkward; use the gerund 'studying' to express purpose. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'type' and gerund after 'for' or use 'for studying'.

× Uh, it's more possible so I can study from different blacks.

✓ It is more convenient, so I can study in different places.

'More possible' is incorrect collocation; use 'more convenient'. 'Blacks' is likely a misrecognition of 'places' or 'blocks'; context suggests 'places'. Use 'so' to connect clauses and 'in different places' as prepositional phrase. Suggestion: Choose correct adjective and noun; ensure logical connection between clauses.

× For example, I write e-mail and reports on my laptop each morning with save times compared to using a phone.

✓ For example, I write emails and reports on my laptop each morning, which saves time compared to using a phone.

The phrase 'with save times' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'which saves time'. Use plural 'emails' and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms ('saves time') and relative clauses to explain reasons.

× I learned to try on the keyboard when I was about 5 years old, umm, during my mother iPhones, uh, uh, and in, in my primary school I learned it during computer classes, uh, when we re practice typing exercise.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was about five years old, using my mother's phone, and later in primary school I learned more during computer classes when we practiced typing exercises.

Multiple errors: 'learned to try' should be 'learned to type' (word choice). 'Mother iPhones' is reconstructed as 'my mother's phone'. Use past tense consistently: 'learned', 'practiced'. 'We re practice' should be 'we practiced'. Use plural 'exercises'. Suggestion: Use correct verb ('type'), reconstruct unclear words sensibly ('mother's phone'), and keep past tense consistent for past events.

× I practice regularly using touch typing exercise and online typing games to view speed and accuracy.

✓ I practice regularly using touch-typing exercises and online typing games to improve speed and accuracy.

'Touch typing' can be hyphenated as compound adjective before 'exercises' and 'exercise' should be plural. 'To view speed' is incorrect; 'to improve speed' is appropriate. Use noun 'accuracy' paired with 'speed'. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'improve' and pluralize 'exercises'.

× For example, I set aside 50 to 20 minutes daily to focus on through the target common mistake and you post through a correction and economic keyboard to reduce fracture.

✓ For example, I set aside 15 to 20 minutes daily to focus on common mistakes and go through corrections and ergonomic keyboard practice to reduce errors.

'50 to 20 minutes' has reversed/incorrect numbers; likely meant '15 to 20 minutes'. 'Focus on through the target common mistake' is ungrammatical; replace with 'focus on common mistakes'. 'You post through a correction and economic keyboard' is garbled; interpret as 'go through corrections and practice with an ergonomic keyboard'. 'Reduce fracture' should be 'reduce errors' or 'reduce strain' depending on meaning. Chose 'errors' and 'ergonomic' for keyboard. Suggestion: Use sensible numeric ranges, correct collocations ('common mistakes', 'go through corrections'), and choose appropriate technical terms ('ergonomic keyboard').