Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は主語と動詞の文法を正しくし、理由を明確に述べる練習が必要です。具体的な比較（例：記憶のしやすさ、速度、見直しやすさ）を短い文で整理して話すと自然に聞こえます。接続詞（because, so, when, therefore）を使って理由を明示し、文を5文以内にまとめてください。発音や語順（play for → prefer, hand lighting → handwriting）も注意しましょう。

예시: I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can visualize the page and recall key points more easily. However, handwriting is slower than typing, so I type when I need to write quickly.

제안: 文を自然な語順と完全な文に直す練習をしてください。道具の呼び方（iPadはタブレットなので'with my iPad'等）や持ち運びの利便性を理由として明確に述べると良いです。接続詞（so, because）を適切に使い、短めの文で情報を整理してください。

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I often work on my laptop. Sometimes I also use my iPad for quick tasks since it is convenient to carry. Because my devices are portable, I can work anywhere.

제안: 過去時制の使い方を練習してください（例：I learned...）。また因果関係を簡潔に表現し、冗長な語を減らすと明瞭になります。具体的にいつ頃か（年齢や学校での時期）を加えると内容が豊かになります。

예시: I learned to type on a keyboard when I started using a smartphone at age 12. Typing messages and emails on my phone helped me practice the keyboard regularly. Over time I became faster and more accurate.

제안: 具体的な方法（毎日の練習、オンライン練習サイト、授業での練習時間など）を箇条書きのように簡潔に述べる練習をしてください。現在形で習慣を説明し、接続詞で文をつなげて流れを良くしましょう。

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly in my school's computer classes. We do timed exercises and use online typing programs to increase speed and accuracy. In addition, I try to type notes instead of handwriting to get more practice.

× I play for hand lighting because when I study something to remember something I. Think it's more rememberable the word or anything to.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I study, I can remember things better by writing them down.

The original sentence has multiple issues: wrong verb choice 'play for hand lighting' should be 'prefer handwriting'; word order and redundancy 'study something to remember something' is unclear; fragment 'I.' splits sentence; 'rememberable' is not standard; 'the word or anything to' is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer' for preference (verb), 'handwriting' as noun, 'remember things better' for clarity. Suggestion: simplify ideas, use clear subject-verb-object order and standard adjectives (e.g., 'better' instead of 'rememberable').

× I type laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

Missing preposition 'on' and missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. Standard collocation is 'type on a laptop keyboard'. Suggestion: include the correct preposition and article: 'type on a laptop keyboard'.

× I use iPad so it's. It's more useful to take anywhere that laptop keyboard.

✓ I use an iPad, so it is more convenient to take than a laptop.

Run-on and fragment issues: 'it's.' breaks the sentence; 'more useful to take anywhere that laptop keyboard' is ungrammatical. Need article 'an' before iPad and comparative construction 'more convenient to take than a laptop'. Suggestion: join clauses properly with a comma and use 'convenient' for portability comparisons.

× When I have been using smartphone I learned how to type a keyboard because I use a keyboard when type my smartphone so.

✓ When I started using a smartphone, I learned how to type on a keyboard because I use the keyboard to type on my smartphone.

Incorrect tense and aspect: 'When I have been using' is incorrect here; use simple past 'When I started using' to indicate when learning occurred. Missing preposition 'on' with 'type on a keyboard' and missing article 'the' before 'keyboard'. Word order 'type my smartphone' should be 'type on my smartphone'. Suggestion: use simple past for completed past events and correct prepositions ('on') and articles.

× How do you improve your typing? We can use laptop because we have information class on my school so we have a chance to improve typing so.

✓ We can use laptops because we have an information class at my school, so we have a chance to improve our typing.

Count noun and article errors: 'laptop' should be plural 'laptops' or 'a laptop'; 'information class on my school' should be 'an information class at my school'. Possessive 'our typing' is more natural than bare 'typing'. Also unnecessary trailing 'so'. Suggestion: ensure noun-number agreement, correct article use, and add possessive pronoun for clarity.