Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one specific reason and one example. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and repetitions like "very good" twice.

예시: I prefer handwriting because I feel it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can draw quick diagrams and I retain the material longer than when I type.

제안: Give a direct answer first (desktop or laptop), then support with two clear reasons. Reduce unnecessary comments and correct grammar (e.g., 'no one has desktops' and 'I type on my laptop every day'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work from home and find it more convenient. Also, a laptop is portable so I can work in different rooms; for formal printing I usually connect it to a printer.

제안: Be precise and concise. State the age and where you learned, then add one short detail about the experience. Remove fillers and repeated phrases.

예시: I learned to type when I was 12 at my elementary school during computer classes. It was a useful experience because it gave me basic skills I still use today.

제안: Correct meaning and word choice (e.g., 'improved by practicing'). Provide a clear routine or method: how often, what exercises or tools you use, and a brief result. Avoid exaggerated phrases like 'every daily seconds'.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes each day using online typing lessons and accuracy drills. As a result, my speed increased and I make fewer mistakes.

× I am a big fan of handwriting, maybe because I have a good one, uh, but typing is also very good, especially for uh, writing uh, essay for homework and uh, it is a more formal way.

✓ I am a big fan of handwriting, maybe because my handwriting is good, but typing is also very useful, especially for writing essays for homework, and it is a more formal method.

Original sentence uses the vague pronoun 'one' to refer to 'handwriting', which is unclear; replace with 'my handwriting'. 'Very good' is informal and imprecise for a skill—'useful' fits better for typing. 'Writing uh, essay' is incorrect noun number and article use; change to the plural 'writing essays' to match general meaning. 'Way' is okay but 'method' is more appropriate in context. Suggest speaking more deliberately and avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Grammar problem type ID: 12.

× I do typing from my laptop keyboard, uh, nowadays no one have desktop, you know, only in the office, maybe on my work, but at home I always work on my laptop, so I use it a lot and then I tell I uh, just print my paper from it and it is the same by the way, not that much difference.

✓ I type on my laptop keyboard. Nowadays no one has a desktop at home; only offices might have them. At home I always work on my laptop, so I use it a lot. I also print my papers from it, and it makes no big difference.

Problems: 'I do typing' is unnatural—use the verb 'type'. 'No one have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'no one has'. 'On my work' is incorrect preposition; use 'at work' or rephrase. 'Print my paper' should be pluralized to 'papers' for generalization. 'It is the same by the way, not that much difference' is awkward; revise to 'it makes no big difference.' Remove filler words and split run-on sentence into clearer sentences. Grammar problem type ID: 27.

× I learned when I was maybe uh, 12 years old, if I'm not mistaken, I was just 12 years old back then and, and that was in my, uh, school, elementary school, and it was good experience for me.

✓ I learned when I was about 12 years old, if I'm not mistaken. That was in elementary school, and it was a good experience for me.

Tense usage is mostly correct, but sentence has redundancies and article errors. 'Maybe uh, 12 years old' is better as 'about 12 years old'. 'My, uh, school, elementary school' is redundant—use 'elementary school'. Add the indefinite article in 'a good experience'. Remove fillers and repetitive phrases and break into two sentences for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 5.

× I am roofed by practicing, practicing every day and every daily seconds. It was very helpful.

✓ I improved by practicing every day. It was very helpful.

'I am roofed by practicing' is incorrect and unintelligible; likely intended 'I improved by practicing' or 'I was improved by practicing'. Use active voice 'I improved by practicing'. 'Every daily seconds' is ungrammatical—use 'every day' or 'every second' depending on intended meaning; 'every day' fits here. 'It was very helpful' is fine. This involves incorrect verb form and misuse of '-ing' phrase; correct to natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 8.