Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons, and avoid hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words (because, since, so) correctly and correct basic grammar (e.g., 'I prefer typing' not 'for a typing').

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting. I learned touch-typing at school, so I can type quickly and accurately, which saves me time when I write essays or emails.

제안: Clarify which device you use and give specific examples of tasks. Avoid contradictory statements (laptop vs desktop) and reduce filler words. Keep it within two to three sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I type on a laptop every day because my job requires me to prepare CVs and reports. As a result, I spend several hours a day typing documents and emails.

제안: Give a clear time reference and one specific detail about learning. Avoid unclear numbers or phrases (e.g., 'on 600'); use past tense correctly and reduce repetition. Use linking words like 'when' and 'so' appropriately.

예시: I learned to type at school when I was about 10 years old in computer class. That training helped me develop speed and accuracy, which is useful for my current work.

제안: Explain a specific practice method and give measurable details (how often, what you type, or tools you use). Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use linking words like 'by' or 'through' to connect ideas.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing daily on my laptop; I type long emails and reports for work for about an hour each day. I also use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer to uh, for a typing because uh, I, I know how to type with the laptop desktop.

✓ I prefer typing because I know how to type on a laptop.

Use of prepositions is incorrect and redundant words present. 'Prefer to for a typing' is wrong; after 'prefer' we use the gerund 'typing' or 'to type'. Use 'on a laptop' (not 'with the laptop desktop'). Remove filler words and duplicates to make the sentence clear.

× I when, when I was a child, when I, I, I was in school.

✓ When I was a child and in school, ...

Sentence has repetition and poor structure. Combine time phrases into a single clause 'When I was a child and in school' to avoid repetition and make the sentence grammatical.

× So I have a course for a computer classes for a typing, so I prefer for typing.

✓ I took computer classes for typing, so I prefer typing.

Incorrect prepositions and article use: 'a course for a computer classes for a typing' is ungrammatical. Use 'took computer classes' or 'had a course in typing'. Use 'prefer typing' not 'prefer for typing'.

× Yeah, I used to type on a laptop because I, I have a work to do for a serving and I make uh, CVS, uh, and uh yeah, I do my job on the laptop, so I do everyday typing on my desktop.

✓ I type on a laptop because I have work serving customers and I make CVs, so I do my job on the laptop and type every day.

Problems: inconsistent tense and incorrect noun phrases. 'I used to type' suggests past habitual; context is present so use 'I type' or 'I use a laptop'. 'I have a work' should be 'I have work' or 'I have a job'. 'CVS' likely means 'CVs'. 'everyday' as adjective vs adverb: use 'every day' for the adverb. Rearranged for clarity and subject-verb consistency.

× When I was at school on 600, in my school they have a computer classes.

✓ When I was at school in 2006, my school had computer classes.

Tense and number errors: 'they have' is present; referring to past use past tense 'had'. 'a computer classes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'computer classes'. 'on 600' is unclear; if meant 'in 2006' correct numeric and preposition to 'in 2006'.

× On that time I learned to type on a keyboard.

✓ At that time I learned to type on a keyboard.

Preposition error: use 'at that time' rather than 'on that time'. The rest is correct: 'learned to type' is appropriate past tense with infinitive.

× So it's good for me to teach in school.

✓ So it was good for me to be taught at school.

Pronoun and voice issue: 'to teach in school' means the speaker taught others; context implies they learned typing, so passive 'to be taught' is correct. Also tense should match past 'was'. Use 'at school' rather than 'in school' for this context.

× So it's very good for me now that I can do a tapping on keyboard.

✓ So it's very good for me now that I can type on a keyboard.

Incorrect word choice and preposition: 'do a tapping' is unnatural; use 'type'. Use 'on a keyboard' or 'on the keyboard'.

× I improve my typing when I do the typing on my laptop.

✓ I improve my typing by typing on my laptop.

Use of tense and phrasing: 'when I do the typing' is awkward. Use 'by typing' to express the method. Present simple 'I improve' is acceptable for habitual action.

× I used to type some very long, long letters.

✓ I type very long letters.

'Used to' implies a past habit that no longer occurs; context suggests current practice. Remove repeated 'long' and use present simple 'I type very long letters' or 'I often type long letters' for habitual action.

× So it's very, uh, advantage of me to improve my typing skills.

✓ So it's a big advantage for me in improving my typing skills.

Incorrect grammar: 'advantage of me' is wrong; use 'advantage for me'. Also 'very' before a noun requires an adjective like 'very advantageous' or 'a big advantage'. Use 'in improving' to link advantage and the action.