Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, uh), correct awkward phrasing, and add one specific reason or brief example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding a contrast.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting. I work in an office and use computers every day, so typing is faster and more efficient; however, I used to write by hand a lot during school.

제안: Provide a direct answer first, remove hesitations, and organise information logically. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to contrast workplace and personal use. Be specific about frequency and contexts.

예시: I mostly type on a desktop at work because that's my daily routine. However, when I'm away from the office I use a laptop for emails and light work in places like home or the park.

제안: Answer directly and finish the sentence. Remove fillers and give a clear timeframe and one specific detail about learning (e.g., lessons or practice). Keep to two sentences max.

예시: I learned to type during school when we had computer science lessons. Our teacher showed us basic skills like turning on the computer and practicing typing and simple applications.

제안: State the main method clearly, correct grammar, and give a specific example of how you practised (frequency or exercises). Use linking words such as 'first' or 'later' correctly.

예시: I improved my typing by using a program called Typesala, which focuses on touch-typing practice. Later, I practised daily on both desktop and laptop for 15–30 minutes to build speed and accuracy.

× I personally prefer typing because nowadays I work on office and most of the time uh, I am engaged with, I engage with tech stuff and most of the things do with keywords.

✓ I personally prefer typing because nowadays I work in an office and most of the time I work with tech stuff and do most things using keywords.

Use 'in an office' instead of 'on office' (correct preposition and article). Replace 'am engaged with, I engage with' with 'work with' for natural collocation and correct verb form. Use 'do most things using keywords' to express means; 'using' is the correct preposition/gerund structure here. Suggestions: use 'in' for locations (in an office), use 'work with' for working with things, and use 'using' to indicate the method.

× But uh, during my school time we mostly go for the handwriting.

✓ But during my school years we mostly used handwriting.

'School time' is unnatural; 'school years' is better. 'We mostly go for the handwriting' mixes tense and count: 'go for' is informal and incorrect here. Use past tense 'used' because referring to the past, and 'handwriting' as an uncountable noun. Suggestion: use 'used handwriting' or 'wrote by hand'.

× Is it working in office? I mostly type on desktop.

✓ Do you mean 'Is it for working in an office? I mostly type on a desktop.'

The original starts with a question fragment 'Is it working in office?' which is unclear. Use 'Is it for working in an office?' If student means about typing location. Also 'type on desktop' needs an article: 'on a desktop.' Use correct article with singular countable nouns.

× Uh it is my kind of daily routine and beside the work whenever I am here to work or home or park at that time I go for laptop and desktop is my side things.

✓ It is part of my daily routine, and besides work, whenever I am at the office, at home, or in a park I use a laptop; the desktop is something I use on the side.

Replace 'beside the work' with 'besides work'. Use 'at the office' and 'at home' or 'in a park' for locations. 'Go for laptop' is incorrect; use 'use a laptop'. 'Desktop is my side things' is ungrammatical—rephrase to 'the desktop is something I use on the side.' Suggestions: use correct prepositions for location (at/in), 'use' for devices, and articles for singular nouns.

× I think it's uh, during school time, we had a subject, computer science and our teacher used to teach how to open computer, how to type, how to use other applications.

✓ I think it was during school that we had a subject called Computer Science, and our teacher taught us how to turn on a computer, how to type, and how to use other applications.

When referring to past events, use past tense consistently: 'it was' and 'taught' instead of 'had' and 'used to teach.' Use 'turn on a computer' or 'open a computer'—'open computer' is incorrect. Add 'us' after 'taught' for clarity. Suggestions: keep past tense for past events and use natural verb phrases.

× And later when I passed my high school and I.

✓ Later, after I finished high school, I continued to learn on my own.

The original is an incomplete sentence ('and I.'). Complete the thought to match context. Use 'finished high school' rather than 'passed my high school.' Suggestion: always finish clauses and use clear verbs like 'finished' or 'graduated.'

× As I remember we had a woman computer application named Typesala which is mainly focused for typing practice and later I'm used with the desktop and laptop and that helps me to enhance my skills typing skills.

✓ As I remember, we had a Windows computer application named Typesala which was mainly focused on typing practice, and later I used both the desktop and the laptop, which helped me improve my typing skills.

'Woman computer application' is likely 'Windows' or 'word-processing'—interpret as 'Windows computer application.' Use 'was' for past description. 'Focused for' should be 'focused on.' 'I'm used with the desktop and laptop' is incorrect; use 'I used both the desktop and the laptop.' 'Enhance my skills typing skills' is repetitive—use 'improve my typing skills.' Suggestions: choose correct noun ('Windows'), use 'focused on', and maintain past tense consistency.