Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix word order and comparative form.

예시: I prefer handwriting. Firstly, handwritten notes feel more personal and are easier to keep as records. Secondly, my typing speed is quite slow, so writing by hand is usually faster for me.

제안: Begin with a direct answer and reduce unnecessary detail. Combine related ideas into one clear sentence and use a linking word for the brief explanation.

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop every day. My father gave me a laptop for my last birthday, so I mainly use that for typing and other tasks.

제안: Avoid filler words and provide a clear time reference. Use a linking phrase to show cause and give one specific activity that helped you learn.

예시: I learned to type after I received a laptop for my last birthday. Because I used it daily to send emails and messages, I gradually improved my typing skills.

제안: Correct grammar and be specific about how the app helps. Use linking words to describe progression and give an example of frequency or a measurable result.

예시: I use a typing app on my laptop that has multiple levels from easy to hard. By practicing on it for about 20 minutes a day, I have gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting as handwriting is something we can preserve with us and it is more faster than typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is something we can preserve, and it is faster than typing.

'as' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer. 'preserve with us' is incorrect phrasing; use 'preserve' or 'keep' (no 'with us'). 'more faster' is redundant: 'faster' is correct. Combine clauses with a comma and conjunction for clarity.

× I usually my typing is very slow so it is the one reason that I prefer writing over hand typing.

✓ Usually my typing is very slow, so that is one reason I prefer handwriting over typing.

The original has wrong word order ('I usually my typing') and awkward phrasing ('the one reason' and 'hand typing'). Reorder to 'Usually my typing is very slow' and use 'that is one reason' and 'handwriting' or 'typing' consistently.

× I have a laptop at my home which was gifted by my father and during my last birthday.

✓ I have a laptop at home that my father gifted me for my last birthday.

Use 'at home' (no 'my home') and prefer 'that' for the relative clause. 'Was gifted by my father and during my last birthday' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'my father gifted me for my last birthday.' Passive 'was gifted' can be active 'my father gifted me' for clarity.

× So I use laptop for typing.

✓ So I use the laptop for typing.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'laptop' (article error). Also 'use laptop' is unnatural; add 'the'. Verb tense 'use' is present simple and acceptable for routines, so keep it.

× My father had gifted me a laptop on my last birthday so umm, I used laptop every day for uh, sending emails and messages.

✓ My father gifted me a laptop on my last birthday, so I used the laptop every day to send emails and messages.

Past perfect 'had gifted' is unnecessary; simple past 'gifted' is correct when events are ordered. Add 'the' before 'laptop'. Use 'to send' instead of 'for sending' for purpose here.

× So uh, it made me learn typing.

✓ So, it helped me learn to type.

'Made me learn typing' is awkward; 'helped me learn to type' is natural. Use infinitive 'to type' not gerund 'typing' after 'learn' in this context.

× I have a typing app in my laptop that trains me for typing.

✓ I have a typing app on my laptop that trains me to type.

Use 'on my laptop' rather than 'in my laptop'. 'Trains me for typing' is nonstandard; use 'trains me to type.'

× It usually have uh, many uh, levels, uh, rising from easy to hard 1.

✓ It usually has many levels, rising from easy to hard.

'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular 'it' (subject-verb agreement/third person). Remove filler 'uh' and stray '1'. 'Rising' as present participle correctly describes the levels. Also remove extra commas.

× So it is a major contribution in improving my typing.

✓ So it has contributed greatly to improving my typing.

'is a major contribution in improving' is awkward. Use 'has contributed greatly to improving' or 'has been a major help in improving' for natural phrasing; use 'to improving' after 'contribute' or 'in improving' but rephrase for clarity.