Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers (uh), and give one specific reason with a short example. Use a linking word to add the detail.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s neater and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly fix mistakes and reorganize paragraphs without making a mess.

제안: Combine sentences for fluency and add one specific detail. Avoid short fragments and repeat words. Use a linking word to show frequency.

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I own a laptop and use it daily. For instance, I complete assignments and prepare presentations on it almost every day.

제안: Give a direct time reference and improve grammar and cohesion. Use a clear topic sentence, a linking word, and a concise specific context to explain when and why you learned.

예시: I learned to type about two years ago when I was at college. At that time, we had to prepare presentations and write assignments on college laptops, so I practised regularly and improved quickly.

제안: Provide a structured answer with one or two concrete methods and avoid filler words. Use linking words (for example, by, so) and give measurable improvements (speed/accuracy) or specific activities.

예시: I improve my typing by practising regularly and using online typing exercises. For example, every day I spend 15 minutes on a typing tutor and type my assignments on my laptop, which helped me become faster and more accurate.

× I prefer typing rather than handwriting, uh, because, uh, typing is more correct.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is more accurate.

'Prefer A to B' is the correct pattern, not 'prefer A rather than B'. 'Correct' describes facts; 'accurate' is better for typing. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× Uh, handwriting can be uh, incorrect, and when we try to correct it, it looks horrible.

✓ Handwriting can be unclear, and when we try to correct it, it often looks messy.

'Incorrect' is not the best collocation for handwriting; 'unclear' or 'messy' fits. Remove fillers and adjust word choice. 'It looks horrible' is informal; 'often looks messy' is clearer and stylistically appropriate.

× So I prefer typing.

✓ So I prefer typing.

Sentence is acceptable; no grammatical change needed. Keep concise answer.

× I prefer to type on a laptop keyboard. Because I have a laptop, I usually write all my writing tasks assignment and prepare presentation on laptop keyboard.

✓ I prefer to type on a laptop keyboard. Because I have a laptop, I usually do all my writing tasks and prepare presentations on the laptop keyboard.

'Write all my writing tasks assignment' is ungrammatical and redundant—use 'do all my writing tasks'. 'Presentation' should be plural 'presentations' to match 'all'. Include article 'the' before 'laptop keyboard'. Combine sentences or keep as two but start second with a capital letter; here kept separate.

× I think it's probably two years ago when I was in college, we had to prepare presentation and write assignment on our college laptop.

✓ I think it was probably two years ago when I was in college; we had to prepare presentations and write assignments on our college laptops.

Use past tense 'it was' for a past time reference. 'Prepare presentation' and 'write assignment' need plural forms to match general activities. 'Laptop' should be plural if referring to students' laptops, or use 'the college laptop' if singular; plural chosen for consistency.

× This time I learn how to type.

✓ That was when I learned how to type.

Use past simple 'learned' for a completed past action. 'This time' is awkward; 'that was when' links to the previous time reference.

× I practice regularly and uh gradually got faster and more accurate.

✓ I practiced regularly and gradually got faster and more accurate.

Maintain past tense to describe improvement that happened after learning: use 'practiced' (past), then 'got' is correct. Alternatively, if speaking about current routine, use present simple: 'I practice regularly and gradually get faster and more accurate.' Remove fillers.

× We had to prepare presentation and try several assignment on our laptop.

✓ We had to prepare presentations and try several assignments on our laptops.

Use plural 'presentations' and 'assignments' to match 'several'. Use plural 'laptops' if referring to each student having one. Maintain past tense 'had to' consistent with context.

× Uh, so I regularly, uh, keep uh, typing on my laptop keyboard.

✓ So I regularly keep typing on my laptop keyboard.

Remove filler 'uh' and extra commas. 'Keep typing' is correct; place adverb 'regularly' before the verb phrase. The original had unnecessary disfluencies and punctuation.