Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Good content and clear preference. To improve, make the response slightly more concise, correct minor grammar (e.g., "on a daily basis", "it depends on the situation"), and use one linking word to connect ideas. Also replace vague phrase "concepts and things" with a specific benefit (e.g., "key points").

예시: It depends on the situation. On a daily basis I prefer typing for messages and emails because it's faster and more convenient. However, when I'm studying I prefer handwriting, as writing notes by hand helps me remember key points and understand difficult ideas better.

제안: Clear answer but contains grammar mistakes and redundancy. Improve by using correct article forms and comparative structure ("faster and more convenient" -> "faster and more convenient"). Use a concise topic sentence and add a brief reason with a linking word.

예시: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day. I usually type on my phone because it's faster and more convenient for sending emails and messages.

제안: Good chronology but inconsistent verb tenses and some awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and replace vague phrases with specifics. Limit to 2–3 sentences and include a linking word to list activities (e.g., "where I learned to type, practised typing games, and used simple drawing programs").

예시: I learned to type in primary school. I attended computer classes where I practised typing, played simple typing games, and used drawing programs, all of which helped improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: Answer is relevant but repetitive and contains grammar errors. Avoid redundancy ("digital era" and "nowadays", and repeated "our"). Give a specific example of an app or method and explain briefly how it helps, using correct subject-verb agreement.

예시: I use online typing apps and games to improve. For example, I practice daily with a typing app that gives speed and accuracy drills, and I gradually increase the difficulty to track my progress.

× Actually, it depends upon the situation.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation.

Use 'depend on' rather than 'depend upon' in this context; 'upon' is more formal and less common here but not strictly wrong. 'Depends on' is the standard collocation.

× On daily basis, I prefer typing to send messages and emails.

✓ On a daily basis, I prefer typing to send messages and emails.

Missing article 'a' before 'daily basis'. Use 'on a daily basis' to indicate frequency. This keeps present simple tense appropriate for habitual actions.

× However, whenever I'm studying, I prefer handwriting because it helps me to remember the concepts and things.

✓ However, whenever I'm studying, I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember concepts and details.

Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' (use 'helps me remember') and replace vague 'things' with 'details' for clarity. Present continuous 'I'm studying' is fine; the sentence uses present tense for habitual effect.

× No, I don't type on desktop or laptop everyday.

✓ No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day.

Articles are needed before 'desktop' and 'laptop' ('a desktop or laptop'). 'Every day' is two words when meaning 'each day'. Also this keeps the negative present simple correct.

× On daily basis I prefer my phone to send e-mail and messages because it's more faster and convenient method.

✓ On a daily basis, I prefer to use my phone to send emails and messages because it's a faster and more convenient method.

Add article 'a' before 'daily basis' and comma. Use 'prefer to use my phone' for clarity. 'E-mail' can be 'emails' plural. 'More faster' is incorrect (double comparative); use 'faster' or 'more convenient' but both comparatives must be parallel: 'a faster and more convenient method'. Add article 'a' before 'method'.

× I learned typing in my primary school.

✓ I learned to type in primary school.

Use verb pattern 'learn to do something' and 'type' (base form) rather than noun 'typing'. Omit 'my' before 'primary school' unless specific; both are acceptable but common to say 'primary school'. Past tense 'learned' is fine.

× I used to attend computer classes where I type different things, do drawing and painting on computer and I also play game which helps me to boost my typing.

✓ I used to attend computer classes where I typed different things, did drawings and paintings on the computer, and I also played games which helped me improve my typing.

Maintain past tense throughout: 'used to' requires past forms: 'typed', 'did', 'played', 'helped'. Use plural 'drawings and paintings' and 'games'. Include 'the' before 'computer' when referring to the classroom computer. Replace 'to boost my typing' with 'improve my typing' for natural phrasing.

× In this digital era, nowadays we have a lots of typing games and apps which helps us to improve our our typing.

✓ In this digital era, we have lots of typing games and apps which help us improve our typing.

Remove redundant 'nowadays' (both 'in this digital era' and 'nowadays' are repetitive). Use 'lots of' without 'a'. 'Which help' (plural subject 'games and apps' requires verb 'help', not 'helps'). Remove duplicate 'our'. Use 'improve our typing' not 'to improve'.