Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng nhưng có vài lỗi ngữ pháp (thì và danh từ số ít/đa số) và lặp ý. Nên mở đầu trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề hiện tại (ví dụ: “I definitely enjoy it”), sửa danh từ không đếm được/đếm được (scape → scenery, landscape → landscapes) và giảm lặp bằng cách nối các ý bằng liên từ thích hợp. Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: một chuyến đi gần đây) sẽ làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

예시: Yes, I definitely enjoy taking pictures of different views. I love capturing scenery when I travel because photos help me remember the landscapes and places I visit. For example, on my last trip to the mountains I photographed the sunrise over the valley and shared the best shots with friends on social media.

제안: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, phát âm từ bị lặp và cấu trúc câu lộn xộn. Nên trả lời trực tiếp (I enjoy both...), dùng linking words như “however” hoặc “while” để đối chiếu, sửa số nhiều/số ít (the countryside/the cities) và tránh lặp từ. Giữ độ dài không quá 4-5 câu và thêm một lý do cụ thể cho mỗi loại cảnh.

예시: I enjoy both countryside and city views because each has its own charm. While the countryside offers peaceful, wide-open landscapes that help me relax, cities provide vibrant streets and interesting architecture that excite me. For instance, I like photographing quiet country fields at sunset, but I also enjoy city skylines at night.

제안: Câu trả lời lặp, có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ bị viết sai (fam familiar), và câu không mạch lạc. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I like both local and foreign views), sử dụng linking word (“however” / “but”) để phân biệt lý do, sửa thì và đại từ (they have), và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (một nơi trong nước và một nước ngoài) để minh họa.

예시: I like both local and foreign views because they each have their own beauty. Locally, I enjoy the familiar comfort of nearby countryside landscapes, while abroad I love the excitement of discovering new places and cultures. For example, I enjoy photographing my hometown’s river but I was thrilled to capture the colorful markets when I visited Thailand.

× I definitely enjoyed it.

✓ I definitely enjoy it.

The Examiner's question is in present tense asking about a general preference; the student should use present simple 'enjoy' to describe habitual actions. Use present simple for routines and general likes.

× I love capturing pictures of different sceneries whenever I travel.

✓ I love capturing pictures of different sceneries whenever I travel.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and is usually not pluralized as 'sceneries', but in spoken English 'scenery' can represent different scenes; better: 'different scenes' or keep 'scenery'. Suggest 'different scenes' to avoid error.

× It helps me remember landscape and place.

✓ It helps me remember the landscape and the places.

'Landscape' and 'place' need articles or plural forms. Use 'the' for specific reference or plural 'places' to refer generally. Here plural 'places' fits the meaning of multiple locations.

× I also enjoy sharing pictures on social media with friends.

✓ I also enjoy sharing pictures on social media with my friends.

Add 'my' to clarify whose friends; without it the sentence is grammatical but 'my friends' is more natural. Preposition 'on' is correct.

× To be honest, I put the countryside and city views because it has their own charms on.

✓ To be honest, I like both countryside and city views because they each have their own charm.

Original has incorrect verb 'put', wrong pronoun agreement 'it has their', and awkward 'on'. Corrected sentence uses 'like both', plural pronoun 'they', and 'have their own charm' for subject-pronoun agreement and natural phrasing.

× Sometimes I prefer to enjoy the peacefulness of countryside, while all the times I love to I I love the excitement of cities.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy the peacefulness of the countryside, while other times I love the excitement of cities.

Errors: 'prefer to enjoy' is awkward (use 'enjoy'), missing article 'the' before 'countryside', 'all the times' incorrect phrase — use 'other times', and duplication 'I I love'. Corrected for natural adverbial contrast and article use.

× I both love local and foreign views because it's has their own beauty.

✓ I love both local and foreign views because they each have their own beauty.

'It's has their' is ungrammatical: wrong contraction and verb. Use 'they each have' to match plural 'views' and convey that each type has beauty.

× Sometimes I appreciate the comfort of fam familiar countryside but all the times I refer to excitement of exploring somewhere.

✓ Sometimes I appreciate the comfort of familiar countryside, but other times I prefer the excitement of exploring new places.

Fix typos 'fam familiar', add article or plural 'countries/places', replace 'all the times' with 'other times', and 'refer to' is wrong verb here — use 'prefer'. Make 'exploring new places' natural and parallel.