Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve further, tighten the language to avoid small redundancies and use one linking phrase to connect your ideas. Also replace vague words (e.g. "things") with more specific nouns and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g. "capture" instead of "take").

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different scenes because it preserves memories. For example, when I travel I often capture forest landscapes or urban skylines and do light editing to enhance colours. This practice also helps me notice subtle details, such as textures and patterns, that I would otherwise miss.

제안: Your response addresses the question and gives reasons, but contains a non-word ('fibroid') and a few small grammar/style issues. Improve by correcting the mistaken word, using a linking word (e.g. 'however' or 'whereas') for contrast, and making sentences more concise. Add a brief specific example to strengthen the answer.

예시: It depends; I appreciate both for different reasons. In cities I enjoy the tall skyscrapers and vibrant street life, whereas in rural areas I prefer the quiet countryside and fresh air. For instance, last month I loved photographing an old market in the city and a quiet rice field on the same trip.

제안: Good direct answer and relevant supporting points. Improve by correcting minor grammar errors ("other country" → "other countries", "feel" → "feels"), adding a linking phrase (e.g. "on the other hand") and including a concise specific example or comparison to make your point more vivid.

예시: I prefer both. Thailand offers diverse landscapes, from beaches to mountains, which I love photographing; on the other hand, traveling abroad feels refreshing because the scenery and culture are new to me. For example, I enjoy photographing Thai temples at sunrise and contrasting them with colourful street scenes in a foreign city.

× When I travel I usually take pictures of things like forest or city views and edit them slightly.

✓ When I travel I usually take pictures of things like forests or city views and edit them slightly.

The noun 'forest' is used in a general plural sense here, so it should be 'forests' to match 'city views' and the idea of multiple examples. Use plural for countable nouns when referring to them in general terms. Suggestion: Use 'forests' or 'a forest' depending on meaning; here 'forests' is more natural.

× I find it interesting because it helps me notice more detail that I might not pay attention to otherwise.

✓ I find it interesting because it helps me notice more details that I might not pay attention to otherwise.

'Detail' as a countable noun in this context should be plural ('details') because you are referring to multiple small things you notice. Use plural when referring to multiple pieces of information. Suggestion: Use 'details' or rephrase 'notice more detail' to 'notice more detail overall' if you want 'detail' uncountable.

× I fibroid appealing in their own ways.

✓ I find both appealing in their own ways.

The original sentence contains a nonword 'fibroid' and incorrect sentence structure. The intended meaning is 'I find both appealing...' which correctly expresses that both urban and rural areas are appealing. Use 'find' with an adjective or participle to describe opinion. Suggestion: Use 'I find both appealing' or 'Both are appealing in their own ways.'

× At the same time I enjoy visiting other country because everything feel new and refreshing.

✓ At the same time I enjoy visiting other countries because everything feels new and refreshing.

'Country' should be plural 'countries' since the speaker means visiting countries other than their own in general. Also 'everything feel' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; 'everything' is singular and requires 'feels'. Suggestion: Use 'other countries' and 'everything feels'. This corrects both article/number and subject-verb agreement (which maps to problem type 27 as well).

× Both are enjoyable in their own ways.

✓ Both are enjoyable in their own ways.

This sentence is correct and shows proper subject-verb agreement: the plural subject 'Both' matches the plural verb 'are'. No change needed. Suggestion: None.