Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy (e.g. "pictures of taking the view"). Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I prefer pictures that include myself or my friends in the scene because they capture memories; for example, I often take selfies on city rooftops or at riversides to remember the moment.

제안: Answer directly, then support with clear, specific reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid repetition. Mention one or two concrete urban features.

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because they often combine interesting architecture with pockets of greenery. For example, I enjoy photos of riverside promenades and parks framed by modern buildings because the contrast makes my pictures more striking.

제안: Give a clear position (both, either, or one) and then explain with specific examples and correct tense. Use linking words (also, for example, because) and avoid repetition of phrases like "there was".

예시: I prefer both my country and other countries because each offers different attractions. For example, in Riyadh province there are many villages with green fields and a clean environment, while traveling abroad lets me photograph unique landscapes and cultural landmarks.

× I would like to take pictures when I was in the view and I take pictures of myself with my friend or by selfie or.

✓ I would like to take pictures when I am at a viewpoint, and I take pictures of myself with my friend or by selfie.

The original uses 'was' which incorrectly places the clause in past tense. The phrase 'in the view' is not natural; use 'at a viewpoint' or 'in the view' -> 'at a viewpoint'. Also maintain present tense for habitual action ('I take pictures'). Use 'by selfie' -> 'by taking selfies' or simply 'selfies'. Suggestion: use present simple for general preferences and correct noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID:9

× I like the view of urban areas because in urban areas there was many greenery seen seen in background and it like cherry on the cake in pictures which I clicking and then there was river you know also in urban areas.

✓ I like views of urban areas because there is a lot of greenery in the background, and it is like the cherry on the cake in the pictures I take; there is also a river in urban areas.

Problems: subject-verb agreement ('there was many greenery' -> 'there is a lot of greenery' or 'there were many green areas'); incorrect repetition 'seen seen'; wrong verb form 'which I clicking' should be 'I take' or 'that I take'; 'it like' needs 'it is like'; tense consistency and word order improved. Use 'a lot of' for uncountable 'greenery' and 'there is' for singular uncountable. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I prefer both the views in my country also is good view because of clear environment and no pollution.

✓ I prefer both, but the views in my country are also good because of the clean environment and low pollution.

Errors: sentence structure and subject-verb agreement ('views... is' -> 'views... are'); 'clear environment' -> 'clean environment' is more natural; 'no pollution' -> 'low pollution' or 'little pollution' fits comparative context. Maintain present tense for preference. Grammar problem type ID:6

× And in my country at Riyadh side there were there was many village and in village there was many fields which look like greenery fields.

✓ And in my country, on the Riyadh side, there are many villages, and in the villages there are many fields that look very green.

Errors: repeated 'there were there was' and incorrect agreement with countable nouns ('many village' -> 'many villages'; 'there was many fields' -> 'there are many fields'). Use 'there are' for plural. Improve preposition 'at Riyadh side' -> 'on the Riyadh side' and use adjective 'green' or 'very green' rather than 'greenery fields'. Grammar problem type ID:3

× I would like to take pictures when I was in the view and I take pictures of myself with my friend or by selfie or.

✓ I would like to take pictures when I am at a viewpoint, and I take pictures of myself with my friend or by taking selfies.

The phrase 'by selfie or' is incomplete; use the gerund 'taking' after 'by' when describing a method ('by taking selfies'). Also ensure tense consistency: 'was' -> 'am' for present preference. Grammar problem type ID:10