Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Add one brief specific detail about what kinds of views you like and why, using a linking word for coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me remember places more clearly. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and city skylines, which remind me of the colors and atmosphere of each trip.

제안: Answer directly with correct comparison structure and clearer reasoning. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and avoid fillers. Give a specific example of an urban sight you like and explain briefly why it represents your country.

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because city landmarks often reflect my country’s culture. For example, I enjoy photographing historic government buildings and modern skyscrapers because they show both tradition and progress.

제안: Make the sentence structure natural and correct (use plural/singular agreement). Give a concise reason and a clearer example with accurate phrasing. Use a linking word like “for example” to introduce the example.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because they showcase our architecture and identity. For example, the Petronas Twin Towers in Kuala Lumpur are iconic landmarks that represent Malaysia’s modern skyline.

× I like taking a lot of pictures of different views because it will makes my memory much better.

✓ I like taking a lot of pictures of different views because it will make my memories much better.

The verb after 'will' should be the base form (make), not 'makes'. Also 'memory' is better as plural 'memories' when referring to multiple remembered moments. Suggestion: use 'will make' and pluralize 'memories' to match meaning.

× I do prefer views in urban areas than rural areas because it just look like in a city, uh, whereas that can show off my country to other people.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas to those in rural areas because they just look like city scenes, which can show off my country to other people.

Use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A than B'. 'Look' must agree with plural subject 'they' not 'it'. Replace vague 'that' with 'which' to introduce a relative clause. Use 'those in' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: 'prefer A to B' and ensure subject-verb agreement and clearer relative pronouns.

× I do prefer views in my own country since it can represent our buildings.

✓ I prefer views in my own country since they can represent our buildings.

Use 'prefer' without unnecessary 'do' unless for emphasis; more importantly, 'they' should refer to 'views' (plural), so use plural pronoun and plural verb 'can represent'. Suggestion: match pronouns and verbs to plural nouns.

× For example, the KLCC buildings is located at our capital city in my country.

✓ For example, the KLCC buildings are located in the capital city of my country.

The plural subject 'buildings' requires the plural verb 'are', not 'is'. Also use 'in the capital city of my country' for natural phrasing rather than 'at our capital city in my country'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and use correct prepositions for locations.