Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (plural/singular and article use), and add one specific detail or brief reason using a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I think photos are the best way to preserve special moments, for example when I capture sunsets while traveling, I can always remember how the place felt.

제안: Begin with a direct answer, correct grammar (remove extra words, fix tense and gerund usage), and use a linking phrase to give a concise reason and a specific example. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer rural views. Since I live in a busy city, I find the countryside refreshing and peaceful, for example I enjoy hiking by quiet fields where I can relax away from traffic.

제안: Answer directly, correct number agreement and tense, and add a brief specific reason or example using a linking word to make the response more informative. Keep it short and natural.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they feel more novel to me. For instance, visiting coastal towns abroad lets me see landscapes and architecture that are very different from what I see at home.

× Yeah, of course I do like taking pictures of different views because taking picture is the best way to keep the memorable moment in my opinion.

✓ Yeah, of course I do like taking pictures of different views because taking pictures is the best way to keep memorable moments in my opinion.

The student omitted the plural or article for 'picture' and used 'the memorable moment' unnecessarily. Use the plural 'pictures' to match 'taking pictures' and plural 'moments' since many moments can be kept. Also omit the definite article 'the' before 'memorable moment' to make the phrase natural. Suggestion: say 'taking pictures is the best way to keep memorable moments.' Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I prefer views in rural areas because I now I'm living in the city and I'm so used to the city view so I get refreshed when I looking at rural views.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I now live in the city and I'm so used to the city view, so I feel refreshed when I look at rural views.

Multiple tense and form issues: 'I'm living' can be simplified to present simple 'I now live' to match the habitual preference 'I prefer'. 'I looking' is incorrect; the verb must be 'look' after 'when I'. 'Get refreshed' is acceptable but 'feel refreshed' is more natural. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habits and use base verb after 'I' in time clauses: 'when I look.' Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I prefer views in other country because I'm so used to the views in my country.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because I'm so used to the views in my country.

The student used singular 'country' after 'other' while 'views' is plural; use plural 'other countries' to match. Alternatively you could say 'in another country.' Suggestion: use 'other countries' or 'another country' to be grammatically consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 1