Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答需要更自然、语法正确且简洁。开头直接回应问题，然后提供一到两句具体原因或例子，避免重复和词汇错误。可以用更准确的词汇如 “capture” 或 “preserve”，并把情感表达放在句末或作为理由。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture and preserve local differences. For example, I like to photograph traditional markets and landscapes, which makes me feel happy and connected to the place.

제안: 回答需要更清晰的主题句和具体理由，避免词汇错误（例如 “poison” 应为 “horizon” 或 “perspective”）。用一两个连贯的支持句解释为什么喜欢城市景观，并举例说明。保持句子数目在三句以内。

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because cityscapes broaden my perspective. For instance, I enjoy photographing skyscrapers and busy streets which show cultural life and architectural variety. This helps me learn more about modern life.

제안: 回答需要先明确偏好（本国还是其他国家），然后给出具体原因和例子。目前句子结构混乱且信息不清晰。使用短句并提供具体细节如城市名称、季节或景点以增强说服力。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I feel more familiar with the culture and landscape. For example, in summer the city where I live is full of flowers and green parks, which I love to photograph because the colors and atmosphere are unique.

× Yes, I very like the taking picture because it can remain the difference, uh, different the the local and I can was a different the close. This makes me happy.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures because they can capture the differences between places, and I can see things up close. This makes me happy.

句中原文把副词和动词使用错误："I very like" 应用副词 "really" 或 "very much" 放在动词后或用 "really like" 放在动词前更自然；"the taking picture" 名词短语不正确，应该用动名词复数 "taking pictures" 或名词短语 "taking photos"；"remain the difference" 用词不当，拍照是 "capture/record the differences"（捕捉/记录差异）；"different the the local" 词序混乱，应改为 "differences between places/local areas"；"I can was a different the close" 动词时态和结构错误，应改为 "I can see things up close"。建议多练习副词位置、动名词用法和常见动词搭配（capture/record + differences），并注意复数形式。

× Umm, I think I prefer the views in urban areas because it's, uh, it can broaden my poison and uh, uh, bigger my views. Uh, it's, it's an observatory. I'm very lucky.

✓ Umm, I think I prefer views in urban areas because they can broaden my horizons and expand my view. It's very interesting. I'm very lucky.

句中存在时态与词汇使用问题："it's, uh, it can broaden my poison" 用词错误，正确短语是 "broaden my horizons"（拓宽视野）；"bigger my views" 结构不对，应使用动词短语 "expand my view(s)" 或 "widen my perspective"；"it's, it's an observatory" 语义不通，原句想表达对城市景观的兴趣，应改为 "It's very interesting" 或类似表述。时态上应保持一般现在时描述习惯性偏好。建议记住固定搭配如 "broaden my horizons" 和使用正确动词（broaden/expand/widen）搭配名词。

× I prefer will see in my own country or my own country experiment. But the summer is very beautiful city because it has many beautiful flower and green, green, uh, it's also very different.

✓ I prefer to see views in my own country and to experience my own country. In summer, my city is very beautiful because it has many flowers and green spaces. It's also very different from other places.

原句时态与结构混乱："I prefer will see" 不符合习惯用法，表达偏好应使用不定式或动名词，如 "I prefer to see" 或 "I prefer seeing"；"my own country experiment" 用词错误，应为 "experience my own country"（体验自己的国家）；"the summer is very beautiful city" 语序与冠词错误，应改为 "In summer, my city is very beautiful"；"it has many beautiful flower and green" 名词单复数和搭配错误，应为 "many flowers and green spaces"。建议练习不定式/动名词表达偏好（prefer to do / prefer doing）和名词单复数及常用搭配（flowers, green spaces）。