Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are grammar mistakes, some redundancy, and a slightly unnatural phrase. Focus on correcting article and number agreement ("a big fan"), verb forms, and word choice ("views" vs "viewpoints"), and keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences). Use one linking phrase to connect ideas.

예시: I love taking pictures and I’m a big fan of photography. In my free time I photograph different viewpoints, like mountains, rivers and fields, because it helps me relax and unwind.

제안: Your answer gives options but is confusing due to word choice and grammar ("I like boat"; "they're over the greater varieties"). Be specific: state preference in a topic sentence, then give 1–2 clear reasons with linking words (e.g., "because" or "as"). Use correct plural/singular forms and natural collocations ("rural areas," "variety of landscapes").

예시: I prefer rural areas because they offer a greater variety of natural landscapes. For example, the countryside has rolling hills, rivers and forests, which feel calmer than busy city scenes.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has several grammar and clarity issues ("it's depend," "the take pictures in others country," "I never saw that"). Start with a clear topic sentence about mood-dependence, then give a concise reason for preferring other countries, with a specific example. Use correct verb forms and articles, and avoid vague sentences.

예시: It depends on my mood, but if I had to choose I’d prefer taking pictures in other countries because the landscapes are often new to me and remind me of special moments. For instance, I photographed a coastal village abroad last year and the colours were completely different from home.

× 'Yes, I love taking pictures and I am a big fans in photography so in my free time I always take pictures in different views such as mountain, river or fields that can help me relax and unwind.'

✓ 'Yes, I love taking pictures and I am a big fan of photography, so in my free time I always take pictures of different views such as mountains, rivers, or fields that help me relax and unwind.'

'Subject-verb agreement and related grammatical issues: "a big fans" is incorrect because the singular article a must match a singular noun; change to "a big fan". Use of preposition: "in photography" is acceptable but more natural is "of photography." Use of prepositions with take pictures: say "take pictures of different views." Nouns need plural forms for general categories: mountain, river, fields -> mountains, rivers, and fields. Also remove the modal "can" because the present simple "help" correctly expresses a habitual effect. Suggestion: match singular/plural and choose correct prepositions to make the sentence natural.'

× 'I like boat, cityscape and countryside scenery, but if I want to choose one I will choose rural area because they're over the greater varieties of landscape and more natural sceneries.'

✓ 'I like boats, cityscapes, and countryside scenery, but if I had to choose one I would choose rural areas because there is a greater variety of landscapes and more natural scenery.'

'Several problems: pluralization and agreement: use plural nouns for general likes (boats, cityscapes). Conditional tense: "if I want to choose one I will" is better as hypothetical "if I had to choose one I would." Pronoun/verb agreement: "they're over the greater varieties" is ungrammatical; use "there is a greater variety" (singular "variety" with uncountable concept) or "there are greater varieties" with plural noun. "Landscapes" plural is natural; "sceneries" is awkward—use uncountable "scenery." Suggestion: fix noun forms, conditional structure, and use "there is/there are" correctly.'

× 'Actually it's depend on my mood, but if I want to choose one, I will choose the take pictures in others country because they can make me remember the special moments and the beautiful scenery.'

✓ 'Actually it depends on my mood, but if I had to choose one, I would choose to take pictures in other countries because they help me remember special moments and beautiful scenery.'

'Present tense and verb form errors: "it's depend" should be "it depends" for present simple third person singular. Conditional/hypothetical: use "if I had to choose one, I would" not "if I want... I will." Infinitive and article errors: "choose the take pictures" should be "choose to take pictures." Plural and determiner: "others country" should be "other countries." Pronoun reference and verb agreement: "they can make me remember" is awkward; use "they help me remember." Suggestion: use correct third person singular forms, proper conditional structure, infinitive, and plural nouns.'

× 'I never saw that.'

✓ 'I have never seen that.'

'Tense and aspect: In this context the speaker refers to an experience up to now, so the present perfect "have never seen" is appropriate rather than simple past "never saw," which implies a specific past time. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences without a specified time.'