Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to add one or two specific details. Also correct verb forms and article usage (e.g., "taking" → "to take", "sceneries" → "scenes"). Reduce filler words like "umm".

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph beaches at sunrise and city streets at night because each scene conveys a different mood; consequently, my photos feel more varied and expressive.

제안: Provide a clear, consistent preference and support it with specific reasons. Fix subject-verb agreement and avoid contradicting yourself. Use linking words like "because" and "whereas" to contrast urban and rural features.

예시: I prefer rural views because villages offer rivers, hills and forests that feel peaceful and natural, whereas urban areas are busy and crowded. Therefore, I find rural landscapes more relaxing and photogenic.

제안: Answer directly whether you prefer domestic or foreign views, then give specific reasons and examples. Avoid vague comparisons and filler words. Use comparative phrases correctly (e.g., "compared to other countries") and limit to two supporting details.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because India offers a wide variety of landscapes — from Himalayan mountains to tropical beaches — and diverse cultures, so I can experience many different scenes without traveling abroad.

× Yes, I love to taking pictures and I love to take pictures from different sceneries.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures and I love to take pictures of different scenes.

Use of 'to taking' is incorrect; after 'love' followed by a verb, use the gerund without 'to' (love taking). Also 'from different sceneries' is unnatural: use 'of different scenes' or 'different scenery'. Replace 'sceneries' with 'scenes' for countable contexts.

× I don't like the same background for every pictures if because umm the different backgrounds give different personalities and different features for that picture.

✓ I don't like the same background for every picture because different backgrounds give different personalities and features to a picture.

Use singular 'picture' with 'every' (every picture). Remove extraneous 'if' and filler 'umm'. Use 'to a picture' rather than 'for that picture' for natural phrasing. Also avoid repeating 'different' unnecessarily.

× So I always love to take different sceneries for my pictures.

✓ So I always like to take pictures in different locations.

'Love to take different sceneries' is ungrammatical: 'scenery' is usually uncountable and 'take scenery' is unnatural. Use 'take pictures in different locations' or 'of different scenes'. Also prefer 'like' or 'love taking' for natural collocation.

× I prefer rural areas because the village beauty is different from the city areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas because village beauty is different from city areas.

Keep nouns consistent: 'village beauty' and 'city areas' are okay but article usage and plurality should be parallel. Better phrasing removes 'the' to make general statements: 'village beauty is different from city areas.' Alternatively: 'the beauty of villages is different from that of cities.'

× Village have different kind of rivers, natural beauty, hills, forest and everything.

✓ Villages have different kinds of rivers, natural beauty, hills, forests, and so on.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Village' (singular) with 'have' incorrect; use plural 'Villages'. Also 'different kind of' should be 'different kinds of'. Use plural 'forests'.

× When we are looking in the urban areas, it's full of busy and city areas and I don't know, I think I prefer urban areas.

✓ When we look at urban areas, they are full of busy streets and buildings, so I think I prefer rural areas.

'Looking in' is wrong preposition; use 'look at'. 'It's full of busy and city areas' is ungrammatical: refer to plural 'they' (urban areas) and specify what is busy (streets). Also the speaker contradicts themselves by saying they prefer urban areas; context indicates preference for rural areas, so corrected to reflect intent. Use present simple 'look' for general statements.

× I'm living in India.

✓ I live in India.

Use simple present 'I live in India' for general facts. 'I'm living' suggests a temporary situation; unless speaker intends temporary residence, simple present is more appropriate.

× We have so many different beautiful places comparing to other countries.

✓ We have so many beautiful places compared to other countries.

Use 'compared to' rather than 'comparing to'. Remove unnecessary 'different' and reposition adjectives: 'so many beautiful places compared to other countries' is correct.

× They have different cultures and different, uh, natural environment.

✓ They have different cultures and different natural environments.

Parallel structure: use plural 'environments' to match 'cultures'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× But comparing to that places, I love my country because we have city areas, we have rural areas, we have urban areas.

✓ But compared to those places, I love my country because we have cities and rural areas; we have everything here.

Use 'compared to' not 'comparing to'. 'That places' is incorrect; use 'those places'. 'City areas' and 'urban areas' are redundant—use 'cities' and 'rural areas' for clarity. Adjust phrasing for naturalness.

× We have everything in, in our place.

✓ We have everything in our country.

Remove repeated filler 'in, in' and use 'country' or 'place' without redundancy. 'In our country' is natural for general statements.