Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用更自然且准确的英语表达，注意单复数和动词时态；回答要更简洁并用连接词衔接细节。例如将“taking picture”改为“taking pictures”，“memorize”改为“remember”，并把短语“while traveled”改为正确的形式。可以在主体句之后用一到两句具体举例支持，但不要超过五句话。

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture and remember small details in my surroundings. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes when I travel, which helps me notice changes in light and atmosphere.

제안: 注意用词准确和句子完整性，例如“free air”不是自然表达，应使用“fresh air”；最后一句不完整且含糊，应说明“what” you often feel. 使用连词（for example、because、so）使句子更连贯，控制在三到四句内。

예시: I prefer rural areas because the countryside has many trees and fresh air that help me relax. I also enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and simple scenery, so I often feel calmer and more refreshed when I visit the countryside.

제안: 注意词汇拼写与搭配错误，如“senior”用词不当，应为“food”/“customs”/“scenery”或直接用“culture”。句子可更自然：先给出偏好，再说明理由和对比。避免重复“actually”。

예시: I'm quite happy with the views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and beautiful. However, I would like to visit other countries to experience different scenery, food and cultures, which would broaden my perspective.

× Yes, I love taking picture of different views because photography helps me capture, memorize and notice small details in my surroundings.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture, memorize and notice small details in my surroundings.

问题类型：名词单复数。原句中 “taking picture” 应为复数 “taking pictures”，因为表示爱好或习惯性动作时通常使用复数形式（拍很多张照片）。建议：在类似表达中使用复数形式，如 “take pictures of …”。

× For example, I often photograph the sunsets and the cityscapes while traveled.

✓ For example, I often photograph the sunsets and the cityscapes while traveling.

问题类型：动词现在分词/过去分词使用（这里对应列表中第10项“Verb in the present participle form”但更贴切为使用 -ing 形式表示同时进行），原句使用了过去式/过去分词 ‘traveled’ 与 while 连用不自然。应使用现在分词 ‘traveling’ 或者改为完整从句 ‘while I travel’ 表示拍摄时正在旅行。建议：用 while + 动名词（-ing）或 while + 主语 + 动词原形/现在时。

× Actually, I prefer rural areas to urban ones because the countryside has many trees and free air which help me relax.

✓ Actually, I prefer rural areas to urban ones because the countryside has many trees and fresh air which help me relax.

问题类型：词汇选择/冠词（列表中最接近的是第22项 Article errors，但问题是词汇用错）。原句中的 ‘free air’ 用法不正确，正确表达应为 ‘fresh air’（清新的空气）。建议：注意常见搭配，‘fresh air’ 表示空气清新。

× I also enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and the neutral scenes, so I often feel that.

✓ I also enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and the neutral scenery, so I often feel relaxed.

问题类型：句子结构/词汇选择。原句 ‘neutral scenes’ 不太合适，且 ‘so I often feel that’ 表达不完整、不明确。应改为 ‘neutral scenery’ 或 ‘calm scenes’，并明确感受，如 ‘feel relaxed’。建议：确保代词或指代句有明确指向，避免模糊的 ‘that’。

× Actually, I'm very satisfied with the views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and beautiful. But I also want to visit other countries to experience different things, senior and culture.

✓ Actually, I'm very satisfied with the views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and beautiful. But I also want to visit other countries to experience different things, scenery and culture.

问题类型：词汇选择/拼写（列表中最接近为第12项代词使用或第13项形容词副词，但这里是词汇拼写错误）。原句中 ‘senior’ 用错且拼写不当，应为 ‘scenery’（风景）。建议：检查拼写并选择语义正确的词；‘scenery and culture’ 是常见搭配。