School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more clear and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, you can say: "My school is near my home, so I only need to walk for 5 to 6 minutes. Previously, I used to attend a school far away, which required me to travel for one to two hours. Now, it is much easier."

예시: My school is near my home, so I only need to walk for 5 to 6 minutes. Previously, I used to attend a school far away, which required me to travel for one to two hours. Now, it is much easier.

제안: Improve clarity and avoid confusing phrases like "learned a lot of rules and disciplines from my phone." Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, say: "Yes, I definitely like my school because it has a good educational system and a positive teaching environment. I have also learned important rules and discipline, which help me grow as a student."

예시: Yes, I definitely like my school because it has a good educational system and a positive teaching environment. I have also learned important rules and discipline, which help me grow as a student.

제안: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words and avoid incomplete sentences. For example: "Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has a friendly and peaceful environment. Many students have achieved success here, which shows the school's effectiveness."

예시: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has a friendly and peaceful environment. Many students have achieved success here, which shows the school's effectiveness.

제안: Clarify your answer and avoid unclear phrases like "there is the stove or so corporative." Use linking words and complete sentences. For example: "The environment at my school is friendly and peaceful. The staff is very cooperative and always ready to help students when needed. Overall, the school environment is perfect for learning."

예시: The environment at my school is friendly and peaceful. The staff is very cooperative and always ready to help students when needed. Overall, the school environment is perfect for learning.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words and more specific details. For example: "Interest in study is very important because it helps you achieve good results in exams. In Pakistan, good grades are necessary to get a good job, so taking interest in your subjects is essential for future success."

예시: Interest in study is very important because it helps you achieve good results in exams. In Pakistan, good grades are necessary to get a good job, so taking interest in your subjects is essential for future success.

× In Before I used to go as we go to a school that was far away and for that I had to travel for the one to two word.

✓ Before, I used to go to a school that was far away and for that, I had to travel for one to two hours.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'In Before' and 'go' in present tense when referring to past habits. 'In Before' is incorrect; it should be 'Before'. Also, 'go' should be in past tense 'used to go' to indicate past routine. 'One to two word' is likely a typo and should be 'one to two hours'. The correction clarifies the past habit and corrects the time expression.

× Now it is more easy.

✓ Now it is easier.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect because 'easy' is a one-syllable adjective that forms its comparative by adding '-er', not by using 'more'. Therefore, 'easier' is the correct comparative form.

× the educational system and the teaching environment is perfect for a student to learn new things

✓ the educational system and the teaching environment are perfect for a student to learn new things

The subject is compound ('educational system and teaching environment'), which requires a plural verb 'are' instead of singular 'is' to agree in number.

× I have also learned a lot of rules and disciplines from my phone, so I definitely love my school.

✓ I have also learned a lot of rules and disciplines at my school, so I definitely love my school.

The phrase 'from my phone' is incorrect in this context; it likely means 'at my school'. Using 'from my phone' is inappropriate when referring to learning rules and discipline in school.

× Yes, because of. Solve because of friendly environment and peaceful place.

✓ Yes, because of the friendly environment and peaceful place.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains an unclear word 'Solve'. The correction removes the fragment and clarifies the reason with a proper sentence structure.

× I definitely prefer my school to be a great choice for every student and I have seen a lot of good examples where student achieved success through this.

✓ I definitely prefer my school to be a great choice for every student and I have seen a lot of good examples where students achieved success through this.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'a lot of good examples' which implies multiple students.

× Success through this cool.

✓ Success comes through this school.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Success through this cool' is likely a typo for 'school'. The correction completes the sentence meaningfully.

× there is the stove or so corporative that you can always go to them for any help and it's always they are always there to help us in our times of need

✓ there are staff members who are so cooperative that you can always go to them for any help and they are always there to help us in our times of need

'stove or so corporative' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'staff who are so cooperative'. Also, 'it's always they are always' is redundant and incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× An overall the school environment is perfect as the.

✓ Overall, the school environment is perfect.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains unnecessary words. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence.

× Definitely you have to take interest in your study to achieve good results and exams or to be successful in the future.

✓ Definitely, you have to take interest in your studies to achieve good results in exams and to be successful in the future.

The phrase 'results and exams' is unclear; it should be 'results in exams'. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to subjects in general. The modal verb 'have to' is correctly used to express necessity.

× And in Pakistan you need good grades to get a good job.

✓ In Pakistan, you need good grades to get a good job.

The sentence is mostly correct but adding a comma after 'Pakistan' improves clarity. The preposition 'in' is correctly used here.