School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تتكلم بشكل أوضح وتستخدم جمل كاملة بدون تردد. مثلاً، وضح كيف تذهب للمدرسة بعبارات بسيطة وواضحة.

예시: My school is near my house. I usually walk there because it is very close, but sometimes I take the bus if I am in a hurry.

제안: ركز على استخدام جمل واضحة ومنظمة، وحاول توضح الأسباب بشكل أفضل مع ربط الأفكار باستخدام كلمات ربط.

예시: Yes, I like my school because the teachers are friendly and helpful. The education is good, and I have improved my grades since I started studying there.

제안: حاول تتحدث بجمل متماسكة وواضحة، واستخدم كلمات ربط لتسلسل الأفكار بشكل أفضل.

예시: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has a quiet library where students can focus. Also, the teachers are very supportive and always ready to help.

제안: حاول تنظيم أفكارك بشكل أفضل واستخدم جمل كاملة مع ربط الأفكار بكلمات مناسبة لتوضيح وصف البيئة.

예시: The environment at my school is friendly and supportive. Everyone is kind and willing to help each other, which makes studying enjoyable.

제안: حاول التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل أوضح وبجمل كاملة، وركز على توضيح أهمية الاهتمام بالدراسة مع أمثلة أو أسباب.

예시: It is very important to be interested in your studies because it helps you learn better and achieve your goals. When you enjoy studying, you can focus more and succeed.

× I usually go by walking or going by the card I will transport or is over using the bus.

✓ I usually go by walking or by car, or I use the bus.

The phrase 'going by the card I will transport or is over using the bus' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'go by walking or by car, or I use the bus.' The verb 'go' is followed by 'by' plus the mode of transport without '-ing' form. Also, 'card' is a typo for 'car'.

× It's very near and.

✓ It's very near.

The sentence 'It's very near and.' is incomplete and ends abruptly. The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary here and should be removed to complete the sentence properly.

× Yes I do because everyone is trying to me and friendly.

✓ Yes, I do because everyone is trying to be nice to me and friendly.

The phrase 'trying to me' is incorrect. The correct form is 'trying to be nice to me.' The verb 'try' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'be'. Also, 'nice to me' clarifies the meaning.

× It's a nice cool.

✓ It's a nice school.

The word 'cool' is likely a typo or mishearing of 'school'. The sentence should be 'It's a nice school.'

× my teacher treat me well and my grades are. Good grades and upgrades.

✓ My teachers treat me well and my grades are good and improving.

The verb 'treat' should be in plural form 'treat' to agree with plural subject 'teachers'. Also, 'upgrades' is incorrect; 'improving' or 'getting better' is appropriate to describe grades.

× The teacher are very supportive and will help me with an every anything you need.

✓ The teachers are very supportive and will help me with anything I need.

The subject 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'an every anything' is incorrect; 'anything' alone suffices.

× it's very quiet in a nice place.

✓ It's a very quiet and nice place.

The phrase 'quiet in a nice place' is awkward. The correct form is 'a very quiet and nice place' to describe the library.

× You can ask for help anytime you need and it's very competitive. Anne.

✓ You can ask for help anytime you need and it's very cooperative.

The word 'competitive' is likely a misused word here; 'cooperative' fits better to describe a friendly environment. Also, 'Anne' seems to be a mishearing or typo and should be removed.

× Saying important things to be interested in your education because that's the suit you as a person that you need to be educated and.

✓ I think it's important to be interested in your education because it suits you as a person and you need to be educated.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and structure. 'Saying important things' is incorrect; 'I think it's important' is better. 'That's the suit you' should be 'it suits you'.

× In teams. It's very attractive chat too.

✓ In terms of that, it's very attractive too.

The phrase 'In teams. It's very attractive chat too.' is unclear and fragmented. The intended meaning is likely 'In terms of that, it's very attractive too.'