School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and direct, but it could be more natural by using simpler phrasing and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of 'I study in Jesus Savior School which is located in the state of Punjab,' you could say 'I study at Jesus Savior School in Punjab.' This sounds more natural and concise.

예시: I study at Jesus Savior School in Punjab.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct tenses. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'vena.' A better response would be to clearly state your current feelings and past feelings with proper linking words.

예시: Yes, I like my school because of my friends. However, when I first started studying there, I didn't like it much.

제안: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence structure and linking words. Also, watch for grammar mistakes like 'held' instead of 'holds' and incomplete sentences. Try to connect your ideas smoothly and use correct verb tenses.

예시: Yes, my school is well known in the area for its high-quality teaching methods. Additionally, it holds sports activities every year, which makes studying there fun.

제안: Your answer has good points but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'did not understand any caution.' Try to use clearer vocabulary and correct verb tenses. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: My school has a positive environment, and the teachers are very helpful. Whenever we don't understand something, we can ask the teachers during their free periods in the staff room, and they help us a lot.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your thoughts into clear sentences and use linking words. Also, avoid repetition and explain your points more clearly.

예시: Having an interest in studying is very important because nowadays, success depends a lot on education. In my opinion, it also depends on the teaching methods that teachers use to make learning effective.

× Otherwise, vena while I was studied over there, I did not like my school.

✓ Otherwise, even while I was studying over there, I did not like my school.

The phrase 'I was studied' is incorrect because 'was' should be followed by a present participle (-ing form) to form the past continuous tense. The correct form is 'I was studying'. Also, 'vena' seems to be a typo and is corrected to 'even'.

× Yes, my school is well known school in the area because of high quality teaching methods as well as every year they held sports activities in the school that make. Fun.

✓ Yes, my school is a well-known school in the area because of high-quality teaching methods, and every year they hold sports activities in the school that are fun.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'well-known school' (article error). 'Well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as an adjective. 'Held' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'hold' (present tense) is correct. 'Make. Fun.' is incomplete and should be 'that are fun' to correctly describe the activities. Also, 'high quality' should be hyphenated as 'high-quality' when used as an adjective.

× My school had positive environment and teachers are very helpful.

✓ My school has a positive environment and teachers are very helpful.

The use of 'had' (past tense) is incorrect because the question is about the current environment. The present tense 'has' is appropriate. Also, 'positive environment' needs the article 'a' before it.

× Whenever we did not understand any caution, we go to the teacher in the off period teacher in the staff room.

✓ Whenever we do not understand any question, we go to the teacher during the off period in the staff room.

'Did not understand' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'do not understand' (present tense) is better. 'Caution' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'question'. 'In the off period teacher in the staff room' is awkward; it should be 'during the off period in the staff room'. The preposition 'during' is appropriate for time periods.

× They help us a lot.

✓ They help us a lot.

This sentence is correct and requires no changes.

× It is very important to have interest in study.

✓ It is very important to have an interest in studying.

'Interest' is a countable noun here and needs the article 'an'. Also, 'in study' is awkward; 'in studying' is more natural.

× Nowadays we all depend upon studies.

✓ Nowadays, we all depend on studies.

The phrase 'depend upon' is correct but less common; 'depend on' is more natural. Also, a comma after 'Nowadays' improves clarity.

× Without study we cannot succeed.

✓ Without studying, we cannot succeed.

'Study' as a noun is uncountable but here the gerund 'studying' is more appropriate to express the action.

× Succeed according to me.

✓ Success, according to me, depends on the teacher's technique.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb. The correction provides a complete sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× It it totally depends upon teachers technique.

✓ It totally depends upon the teacher's technique.

'Teachers technique' needs the possessive form 'teacher's' and the definite article 'the' before it.

× How which method that teacher use.

✓ Which method the teacher uses.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence is a proper question fragment with subject-verb agreement ('teacher uses').