School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and complete. Instead of 'Currently, I study in the high school in Hong Kong,' you could say 'I currently attend a high school in Hong Kong.' This sounds more natural and fluent. Also, adding a little more detail would enrich your answer.

예시: I currently attend a high school in Hong Kong, which is located in the central district of the city.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more coherent and natural. Avoid starting sentences with 'Because' or 'And' in spoken English. Try to combine your ideas into one or two sentences using linking words like 'because' or 'and' within the sentence. Also, be careful with grammar and sentence structure.

예시: I like my school because it has a very studious learning environment where my teachers have witnessed my personal growth, and I have also made lifelong friendships there.

제안: Your answer contains many grammatical errors and unclear phrases which affect clarity. Try to speak in complete sentences and avoid pauses or fillers. For example, 'extra curricular Lee' should be 'extracurricularly'. Also, avoid fragmented sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: I think my school is one of the best places to study because my classmates are very competitive both academically and in extracurricular activities, which motivates me to push myself and manage my time more efficiently to achieve better results.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and connected. Avoid sentence fragments like 'Which is 1 of.' Instead, combine your ideas into complete sentences using linking words such as 'and' or 'which'.

예시: I would say the environment at my school is studious, but at the same time, students are very enthusiastic about answering the teachers' questions, which is one of the reasons we all enjoy learning.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by grammatical mistakes and sentence fragments. Try to speak in clear, complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, 'interest plays a significant role in motivating me to overcome difficulties because as I progress to higher levels, the syllabus becomes harder and larger.'

예시: Having an interest in the subjects I study is extremely important because it motivates me to overcome difficulties, especially as the syllabus becomes more challenging at higher levels, helping me to stay focused.

× Currently, I study in the high school in Hong Kong.

✓ Currently, I am studying at the high school in Hong Kong.

The sentence describes an ongoing action happening now, so the present continuous tense 'am studying' is appropriate instead of the simple present 'study'. Also, 'at the high school' is the correct preposition for attending a school.

× I do like my school. Because it has a very studious learning environment, that is where my teachers witnessed my personal growth.

✓ I do like my school because it has a very studious learning environment, and that is where my teachers witnessed my personal growth.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' creates a sentence fragment. Combining the sentences with 'because' and 'and' corrects the structure and improves flow.

× I do think my school is one of the best place to studying because all of my.

✓ I do think my school is one of the best places to study because all of my

'One of the best' requires a plural noun 'places' not 'place'. Also, after 'to' the base form of the verb 'study' should be used, not the gerund 'studying'.

× Classmates and peers are academically an extra curricular Lee competitive in the really pressured me into pushing myself to the limit and two.

✓ Classmates and peers are academically and extracurricularly competitive, which really pressured me into pushing myself to the limit and to

The adverb 'extracurricularly' is the correct form to modify 'competitive'. Also, 'and two' is a mishearing of 'and to'. The sentence needed correction for adverb placement and word choice.

× Currently, I study in the high school in Hong Kong.

✓ Currently, I am studying at the high school in Hong Kong.

The correct preposition for attending a school is 'at' not 'in'.

× all of the students here are very enthusiastic in answering the teachers question.

✓ all of the students here are very enthusiastic about answering the teachers' questions.

The phrase 'enthusiastic in' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'enthusiastic about'. Also, 'teachers question' should be plural possessive 'teachers' questions'.

× Which is 1 of. The reason why we all enjoy learning.

✓ This is one of the reasons why we all enjoy learning.

Starting a sentence with 'Which' here creates a fragment. Rephrasing to 'This is one of the reasons' forms a complete sentence.

× Being interested in the subjects that I'm studying in right now is extremely crucial a place, a significant role and.

✓ Being interested in the subjects that I'm studying right now plays an extremely crucial and significant role

The phrase 'is extremely crucial a place, a significant role and' is incorrect. The correct expression is that interest 'plays an extremely crucial and significant role'.

× Motivating me to overcome difficulties because as I progressed to higher levels, the syllabus is getting harder and larger so.

✓ It motivates me to overcome difficulties because as I progress to higher levels, the syllabus gets harder and larger.

The original sentence is a fragment and has tense inconsistency. Changing to 'It motivates me' and present tense 'progress' and 'gets' corrects the structure and tense.

× My genuine interest in these topics help me to stay focused.

✓ My genuine interest in these topics helps me to stay focused.

The subject 'interest' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in present tense.