School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise answer directly to the question, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "My school is very close to my home because my parents want me to be safe. They often accompany me to school."

예시: My school is very close to my home because my parents want me to be safe. They often accompany me to school.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains irrelevant or unclear parts. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or memories, using linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I like my school because I have many fond memories there. Moreover, I enjoyed my time with friends and teachers."

예시: Yes, I like my school because I have many fond memories there. Moreover, I enjoyed my time with friends and teachers.

제안: Your answer has good content but some grammar and word choice errors. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. For example, "Yes, it is a good place to study because the teachers communicate well and are very helpful. They treat students like their own children, making us feel safe."

예시: Yes, it is a good place to study because the teachers communicate well and are very helpful. They treat students like their own children, making us feel safe.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has unclear phrases. Try to give a complete and clear description with specific details and linking words. For example, "The environment at my school is peaceful and pleasant. The community is friendly, and children enjoy playing in the large playground."

예시: The environment at my school is peaceful and pleasant. The community is friendly, and children enjoy playing in the large playground.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and specific reasons. For example, "In my opinion, having interest in studying is very important because without it, you cannot achieve your goals. Interest motivates people to work hard and succeed."

예시: In my opinion, having interest in studying is very important because without it, you cannot achieve your goals. Interest motivates people to work hard and succeed.

× They really don't didn't want to.

✓ They really didn't want to.

The sentence incorrectly uses both 'don't' and 'didn't' together, which is redundant and grammatically incorrect. The correct past tense negative form is 'didn't want to'. In English, only one auxiliary verb is needed to form the negative past tense.

× Send me far away from my home and they actually go with me every time whenever I go to school because.

✓ They didn't want to send me far away from my home, and they actually go with me every time I go to school.

The original sentence lacks a subject for 'Send me far away' and ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the thought. The corrected sentence adds the subject 'They' and completes the sentence properly. Proper sentence structure requires a subject and a complete thought.

× I literally enjoy my school life.

✓ I literally enjoyed my school life.

The context indicates the student is talking about past experiences at school, so the past tense 'enjoyed' is appropriate instead of the present tense 'enjoy'. Using the correct tense maintains consistency and clarity.

× It was the best time of my life. I can see that row.

✓ It was the best time of my life. I can see that now.

The word 'row' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'now'. Correcting it to 'now' makes the sentence meaningful. Also, 'can see that now' is present tense, which is acceptable here as the student reflects on past experiences.

× It is a quite good place to study because the teachers are very. Communic, communicated and they're very helpful.

✓ It is quite a good place to study because the teachers are very communicative and they're very helpful.

The phrase 'a quite good' is incorrect; 'quite a good' is the correct order. Also, 'communic, communicated' is incorrect; the adjective 'communicative' should be used to describe teachers. Proper adjective use improves clarity and correctness.

× They ask that they treat their students like their children's and they make them feel very secure and safe.

✓ They treat their students like their children and make them feel very secure and safe.

The phrase 'They ask that they treat' is incorrect; it should be 'They treat'. Also, 'children's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be the plural noun 'children'. Correct pronoun and noun forms are essential for clarity.

× The community is very high profile and a children's really enjoy because there is a ground, a big round and.

✓ The community is very high profile and the children really enjoy it because there is a big ground.

The phrase 'a children's' is incorrect; 'children' is plural and does not take an article. Also, 'a big round' is likely a typo for 'a big ground'. Correct quantifiers and noun forms are necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× My school is pretty near from my home because my parents are very careful about me.

✓ My school is pretty near my home because my parents are very careful about me.

The preposition 'from' is unnecessary after 'near'. The correct phrase is 'near my home'. Removing unnecessary prepositions improves sentence correctness.

× It makes a people. It makes people so much.

✓ It makes people very motivated.

The phrase 'a people' is incorrect; 'people' is a plural noun and does not take an article. The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'very motivated' clarifies the meaning. Correct pronoun and noun usage is important for clarity.