School— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，句子不完整，建议练习完整表达地点信息，避免断句。

예시: My school is located in Jinan, which is a city in the western part of Shandong Province.

제안: 表达情绪过于负面且句子不完整，建议用更自然的表达方式，并补充具体原因。

예시: I don't like my school very much because the administration is poor and the infrastructure is inconvenient, which affects my learning experience.

제안: 表达较清楚，但语法和词汇使用有误，建议注意语法准确性和词汇搭配。

예시: I don't think my school is a good place to study because the weather is very hot, and many classrooms do not have air conditioning, which makes studying uncomfortable.

제안: 描述较具体，但语法错误较多，建议加强主谓一致和时态的使用。

예시: My school has a big lake surrounded by trees, and a mountain is reflected on the lake, which is really beautiful. However, I often don't feel like appreciating it.

제안: 表达观点明确，但语法和逻辑连接不够流畅，建议使用连接词并注意主谓一致。

예시: I think interest plays a key role in studying because without interest in a subject, you lack motivation to learn it, which makes the process very difficult.

× My school is. In a city called Jinan, where it's a. West of Shandong Province.

✓ My school is in a city called Jinan, which is in the west of Shandong Province.

原句句子结构不完整，断句错误。应将相关信息合并成完整句子，避免句子碎片。建议将断开的句子合并，形成完整表达。

× I really hate my school. Because it had poor administration.

✓ I really hate my school because it has poor administration.

句子时态不一致，描述现在的情况应使用现在时。将过去时'had'改为现在时'has'。

× And. The inconvenient infrastructure.

✓ And inconvenient infrastructure.

句子断裂，缺少谓语，导致句子不完整。应将断句合并，形成完整表达。

× And the teacher here is really.

✓ And the teachers here are really bad.

句子不完整，缺少形容词或补语。且'teacher'应为复数'teachers'，与后文形容词搭配。

× a lot of classroom have no air condition.

✓ a lot of classrooms have no air conditioning.

'classroom'应为复数'classrooms'，'air condition'应为' air conditioning'，表示空调设备。

× So if we study in the classroom or library, we will be sweaty.

✓ So if we study in the classroom or library, we will be sweaty.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× And it really uncomfortable for us.

✓ And it is really uncomfortable for us.

缺少系动词'is'，导致句子不完整。应补充系动词。

× Well, my school have a big lake surrounded by the trees and a mountain reflect on the lake.

✓ Well, my school has a big lake surrounded by trees and a mountain reflecting on the lake.

主语'school'为单数，谓语动词应为'has'。'reflect'应为现在分词'reflecting'，修饰'mountain'。

× That's really beautiful.

✓ That's really beautiful.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× But most of time I have no mood to appreciate them.

✓ But most of the time I am not in the mood to appreciate them.

缺少定冠词'the'，'have no mood'表达不自然，应改为'am not in the mood'。

× I think interest play a key role on study because when you have no interest on some subject, you will be no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

✓ I think interest plays a key role in study because when you have no interest in some subjects, you will have no motivation to learn them and it will be really painful.

主语'sinterest'为单数，谓语动词应为'plays'。介词'on'应改为'in'。'some subject'应为复数'some subjects'。'will be no motivation'应为'will have no motivation'。

× So if you can't learn it well.

✓ So if you can't learn it well, it will be difficult to succeed.

句子不完整，缺少主句。应补充完整句子，使表达完整。